by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand
Aug 2010 990 Views 28 comments
Shhhhh... "My Opto"
May I crawl inside you
may I stray around your mind
May I gently peer into
your left and right
and swim amongst my find
May I sit at times
just within you
and soak your life of rhymes
May I stay within silence
a mere shadow in the dark
I shall not harm you
I wont even leave a mark
May I taste your blood of life
and wander to your eyes
can I look through your window
What you see I would not prise
May I lick your lips of laughter
the shrill of smiles upon
secretly you will feel me
A taste from far beyond
May I venture to your pumping heart
I nervously await
I cannot help this feeling
Its you I want to take
A love that is a devourer
sweet feel of all that is within
I wrap my soul to you
with words I must begin
Rest your lips upon mine my love
hold me in your body so sweet
For I shall never leave you
one day we shall meet
I know not from hence you will come
I know not your passionate touch
I know tho...................
...................I shall fall
Into your labyrinth of..................
................such
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may I stray around your mind
May I gently peer into
your left and right
and swim amongst my find
May I sit at times
just within you
and soak your life of rhymes
May I stay within silence
a mere shadow in the dark
I shall not harm you
I wont even leave a mark
May I taste your blood of life
and wander to your eyes
can I look through your window
What you see I would not prise
May I lick your lips of laughter
the shrill of smiles upon
secretly you will feel me
A taste from far beyond
May I venture to your pumping heart
I nervously await
I cannot help this feeling
Its you I want to take
A love that is a devourer
sweet feel of all that is within
I wrap my soul to you
with words I must begin
Rest your lips upon mine my love
hold me in your body so sweet
For I shall never leave you
one day we shall meet
I know not from hence you will come
I know not your passionate touch
I know tho...................
...................I shall fall
Into your labyrinth of..................
................such
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Posted: Aug 2010
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Comments (28)
These, recieved,
By a man of passion,
By not of choice, but
Of desire, would feel
His soul melt in love.
Forgive me for being so bold as to answer your beautiful poem in such manner.
Thank you for such moving words.
it reminds me of an excerpt from a Rob Thomas song called Lonely No More...
"What if I was good to you? What if you were good to me?
What if I could hold you 'til I feel you move inside of me?..."
...yet your words and experience express something much deeper ~
I hold you all so dear.
My passion spilt over into this writing of love..
I so enjoy passing you all, my writings, that I have reached
deep inside to come forth.
One day he may appear.....
X Sophia
Utterly beautiful..no more can I say..
Ljj..
Oh to be in love
SS
Sophia
XX
Very Nice actually stunning, good choice of words, ( Nice)
Hpoefully you will Live that Dream...
Hotrod
May I stay within silence
a mere shadow in the dark
beautifully expressed....your work is just so good...
Thank your "beautiful friend" for being the impetus to bubble this Opto write up to the top. I wrap my soul to you with words! WOW! So many images embedded in this labyrinth of love. Escher should be impressed! I definitely am!
Thank you for taking time to read my work, my friend
Hopefully we all will live our dream., its possible!
Sophia
xx
Your comments so inspire me,yet humble me Cafe!
I thank you sincerely.
I kinda thought you would have a great love of Escher too!.
Sophia
xx
my spirits rise, when reading your comments, thank you dear friend...
I shall keep this quill flowing...
Sophia
xx
the deep passion and quiet stillness i tried to weave delicately through my write, I'm so glad you felt it too, but then you also write with a deep honest passion, you understand...
I treasure your comments Gentle Lady Paloma
Sophia
xx
I deeply thank you Jeddah for taking time to read my write and to comment, you little poetess you!
Sophia
xx
What can I say Gnj4u!
I always respect your deeply inspiring comments...Which I then wrap my heart and soul around, therefore you give me courage and spirit to keep this quill twitching.
I thank you so much, beautiful friend..
Sophia
xx
Love Soph