Nothing to see

by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand

Aug 2010 620 Views 10 comments

Nothing to see.......

Dawn awakes
blissful eyes

So weary of the day

Not heartfelt of the coming
sigh

It just moves with sudden jolts
such unjust worlds

Lets go deeper

No its too empty

But they are moving closer
So simply heading

Souls freaking

Silently escaping

lost

lost

lost

Fail me not!

Pleas allow me to hold mine own heart

Maybe unknown to me

I grasped and went

Towards I ran

Then I slowed down

"On the other side"

I survived

Or just turned away and....

........ died.........

"Or so simply survived"

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Posted: Aug 2010

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Comments (10)

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAAug 26, 2010

Very nice...

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAAug 26, 2010

Wow! It's amazing how you create from your soul in so few words. Always enjoy your work, Sophia.

beautifulyouNew York, USAAug 26, 2010

Hauntingly beautiful Sophia.

With heart in hand, there is life beyond survive ~

It's easy to see your Soul is your guide, and that is...
everything

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAAug 26, 2010

i think this is part of your past sophia that is hard to talk about in a clear way. much better the obscurity yet still slowly releasing. we all have ghosts in our past, all different, unique, and we all deal with them in different ways. every time you breathe a little of it out, it serves to set you free of it a step at a time.

ben999dungarvan, Waterford IrelandAug 26, 2010

the hand that guides, is not always seen, beyond comprehension, very nice.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAAug 26, 2010

I always enjoy your poems so much

tinypixiestoke on trent, Staffordshire, England UKAug 26, 2010

Your poem speaks volumes to me, especially this part...."Towards I ran Then I slowed down "On the other side" I survived Or just turned away and.... ........ died......... "Or so simply survived"........peace, love and blessings Sophia