sophia, your poem is sad and expresses the feelings many often feel, "I clutched and held To my own heart I kept", of course is double-edged, and "To be within happiness of course it is to give" adds the notion that to get love we have to give love, yet ends that maybe he didn't love me, but only some memory...a good write lady. ;-)
these things happen..but they fade and new better memories fill your heart and mind..
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKSep 2, 2010
Poetry beauty made from a litany of loss, Sophia.
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USASep 2, 2010
The only cure for love lost is love found. This touching piece reaches a lot of hearts, I'm sure. Condolences on the loss, kudos on the write and good fortune on the horizon.
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To my own heart I kept", of course is double-edged, and "To be within happiness
of course it is to give" adds the notion that to get love we have to give love, yet ends that maybe he didn't love me, but only some memory...a good write lady. ;-)
Thank you S. for sharing!