Hi! Please have a listen to this

i liked it

I listened to it twice and it has a very predictable (and that's not a bad thing) chord progression. I liked your use of the rocking progression of 7th's into minor and minor 7th's. I think it is a beautiful progression I can tell the keyboard you are using doesn't have velocity so it is impossible to have any expression. If you played it on an real acoustic piano the expression would be there I have no doubt. The more you practice your singing the better your breath control will be. When I write songs, I try to have structure. Maybe you should arrange it to "Intro-Verse1-Verse2-Chorus-Verse3-chorus-repeat chorus-ending" Overall I really did like it a lot.

"How Are You" is definitely my favorite I'm an old heavy metal head and when I'm at the guitar......it shows but when I'm at the piano, it's love songs and power ballads one after another I hope you structure out "How Are You" and slow down the tempo like a David Foster song and repost it If I heard that song on the radio, I would buy it. You are good at mixing too. I would add a nice 3 or 4 second "hall" reverb to the vocal track and..... By the way, what software do you use for your hard disk recording? Personally I use Reaper. I didn't even know that youtube was not in China. I know Google isn't anymore, but youtube too? That's odd......d'oh Keep on performing

I have a few songs I wrote over the years, but I am paranoid about performing them. I went to college originally for audio recording and when I took the record production class and learned about copyrights it changed me forever. My instructor told us to never perform any original material until you have copyrighted it because someone else could figure out your song and copyright it and you could never prove it is yours. Kind of scary huh? It happens all the time in the music industry. The songs I have written have very important meaning to me and it would crush my soul if someone stole my work. I will end up getting around to doing a "Poorman's Copyright" when I am done recording all my work. The poorman copyright will hold up in court. Okay I hope I haven't scared you I don't mind giving you some help with "How Are You" with your permission. I just need to hear it a few more time and play along and I will never forget how to play it. It is currently in the key of C right? I messed around with the progression, but I went down a step to B major I don't have it down pat yet, but I will get there shortly. It would sound cool to Goth it up a bit though. Adding a guitar track (acoustic would be awesome) some strings......I'm getting ahead of myself I'll wait until you have it finished.

Awesome. I like your innocent approach to your music Many, many many external interruptions? Wow you must be a busy person Once I have learned what you have wrote, I can play around with it and see what you think I do like your style though especially on your piano work. I will keep you posted on what I come up with. All you have for collaboration where you live are nerds? I bet some of them are awesome musicians though