Dixie Mine Cave

Must be like the Whatipu rave!

I'm sure it was

Such a forgotten but longing of the natural buzz

Crooked Weta's and the Glow Worm scene
a land beyond time

Come see and feel, just what I mean


Of innocent played, an open door
fears you may, grab that oar

Bats! more bats!

Hanging posers of the moonlight

An insaciable hunger
so timely
that the crawling eyes
look and feel

Such sweet berries of deepest vein thirst

what ever could be a worst

Within a breath all blew away
there will be

No death today

An untouched land
in many ways

Haere Mai

Come out to the plays

SS
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
Oh yes Whaitpu...oh how we danced!!!!!!

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Comments (13)

trurorob
Happy days!!, written nicely
rob
sophiasummer
My Aroha to you B
Aren't cave parties fun!

Sophiahug
agoodguy2have
sophia, a dark and cool write...all quiet and ringing to my ears. did you bring a rope? ;-)
Gashly
'hanging posers of the moonlight'...now there's a line i'll contemplate next time i see one flitting at dusk here. completely rad! again, soph, i can feel it. though it's way too early for dancing here...ugh... laugh
hariksna
Just googled whatipu...Amazing ...my heart longing to be there...and the poem adds to the eagerness.....fabulous write SS
Ladybee42
you make it sound great sophia!
thanks for the write
thumbs up bouquet bouquet
freeatlast64847
You paint a great picture Sophia. Kudos! wine
Ladyjj
Lovely Sophia...and enjoyed!
Again worded with elegance and creativity..and happy timeswine

Ljj
Happygolucky4u
applause You spin a good yarn. I so enjoyed.bouquet
AustinJaneFan
Makes me want to booze it, and get my knees up!
gotitall
lovely interpritation of your experience, bats, and caves, are you a vampire sophia.
Dementia
good poem sophia...look foward to reading more... party onhead banger
mike7375
I have no idea where you are talking about but the way you write it makes me want to be there bouquet
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