Again Your kiss

by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand

Oct 2010 804 Views 16 comments

Again Your kiss

With halted breath
I still breathed within

Filling eyes together
unstoppable

A rush within

Separation of
ones lips

An entry
such a delicious warmth

lays longing

upon our kiss

Please

Kiss me

Again

SS
xx
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~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Oct 2010

About this poem:

Its a sweet cherished wonder..
That first kiss
Sophia
XX

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Comments (16)

GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 13, 2010

filling eyes together...unstoppable

TRUTH!
and soph, you nailed the landing! perfect score!

kisses...the best food for the soul.

LOVED!

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 13, 2010

kiss sophia some more,lol,,nice and sweet i can say,,

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 13, 2010

Loved this, first kiss, no frogs here for sure

Now I will have to think back a bit

ginger1959Kingston, Ontario CanadaOct 13, 2010

The first kiss is always something to remember!!!

LOVELY POEM!!!!

Truly,

Ginger

gotitallDungarvan, Waterford IrelandOct 13, 2010

lovely poem sophia, i remember it well, it was divine, until her father tapped me on the head, with the broom handle, gave me 10 seconds to clear the picket fence, my eyes still watering, but for all the wrong reasons.

Swan87Syria, QatarOct 13, 2010

WoW .. Well Done Sophia :) loved it

Swan

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAOct 13, 2010

Could feel it on my lips! Well done!

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 13, 2010

You've captured a great portion of that magical first kiss.. It has sophia written all over it.. cafe

beautifulyouNew York, USAOct 15, 2010

"An entry
such a delicious warmth

lays longing

upon our kiss

Please

Kiss me

Again"

I LOVE the cadence of this write..

It's perfection!

Awesome Sophia!

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandOct 19, 2010

Hello Gashly!

Thank
you

"food for the soul, indeeeeeeed!" Yes!
more flowers

SS
xx

Hello Jeddah!

yes please!
Thank you!
First kiss, can be a wonderful thing.

SS
xx

Hello Redex!
Thank you, and you shall remember, the one that made you smile...
Ones first kiss just leaves a new wonder.

As time goes by, a first kiss, becomes so much more
SS
xx

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandOct 19, 2010

Hello BeautifulYou!
Thank you!
your gracious comments, I treasure

I really do remember that first kiss, the fact that "It was" ...my first kiss..

SS
xx

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandOct 19, 2010

Hello Swan!

I enjoyed writing this little piece!
So Glad! you enjoyed Swan!
Thank you!

Keep gliding!
SS
xx

pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJan 24, 2011