thought I was in love

It hurts when I'm awake
It hurts when I breathe
Thought I was in love
You cut the strings what a tease

You left me just hangin
In a spinning head dream
Thought you were for real
My mistake now it seems

I get a little nervous
When you're not around
What the hells left to live for
Is it better six feet underground

I just can't understand it
I was so nice to you
You lit up my world
Made me think love was true

It hurts not to be noticed
Feel like a used up frown
Shoved back deep in a closet
Told not to make a sound

Thought I was in love
Not the next number in line
Could you just tell me the truth
Instead of wasting my time

It still hurts when I breathe
No life deep down inside
My heart stopped weeks ago
Don't jump start me I've died

Bright stars and planets
Is there any love around
If anyone can hear me
Reach my arm through the ground!
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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
a dark love poem i wrote,when i THOUGHT i was in love for the first time,i think we've all felt this way at one time or another.

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Comments (2)

jeddah12
sad but true and you pin it,,nice poem,,wise words use and you rhym well,,keep moving forward,theres always another one tomorrowcheers thanks for sharing
niah9
Oh it hurts...and you prove you understand the mixed bag of tricks called love, but better to have loved and lost...
If you were 6 foot under, you'd never know what it felt like to love and have it returned...hopefully the next poem will be of joy.
Niah bouquet
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