In Sane

by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand

Nov 2010 784 Views 12 comments

"In-Sane"

the souls lay in wait
of dawn
to scream their pain
of sudden scorn

rivers of blood swept through the veins

an untouched love
struggling to tame

moving, striking, seething mass

heaving untold terror

on an uncharted course

unfolding darkness
shunning the light
to wreak its havoc

on mere mortals
they slurp

bloated and unguarded
they sleep in gripping pain

but for we
do we grasp in fear

that one not knows

who is sane

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Don't pick me!

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Posted: Nov 2010

About this poem:

Now on a lighter note, I choose "C"

Sophia
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Comments (12)

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandNov 27, 2010

Thank you HediStuff!

I agree to disagree

I Don't drink blood, just thirst for words.

Soph
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niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 27, 2010

Scary write SS...but just had to read on....
well hooked....

Niah

fatbobloverhamilton, Waikato New ZealandNov 28, 2010

well it has overtones of death or just after soff...

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandNov 28, 2010

Yes it is a dark write, and so deep as in caverns of darkness.
a bright light around the head, just didn't show the way that day.

My way, of loss...

"the Men Of Pike"

and,many more of times before
from each part of the world...

Soph
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EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusNov 28, 2010

loved it, yes, who indeed is 'sane'?

who defines 'sanity'?...

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USANov 28, 2010

it's been suggested that the sane are the ones who constantly question their sanity

but who really knows...

lovely poem sophia

pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaNov 28, 2010

"sanity refers to the soundness, rationality and reasonableness of the human mind, as opposed to insanity. A person is sane if they are rational."

Irrational/No mind = Insane
therefore I am
thank god

thanks sophia

pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaNov 28, 2010

oh...yes

sane is In

mike7375Castleblayney, Monaghan IrelandNov 28, 2010

Nice work

sophiasummerOPNorthland, New ZealandNov 29, 2010

Hello Niah!
Sorry I scared you lol!
Love your comments, glad you hung in there.

What beautiful weather we having Niah..
Take care

Love Sophia
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Hello GGTH!
Loved your comments!!
LOL! I knew you would take that stance!

I smile

Sophia
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Hello FBBL

How nice to see you here on the corner!
Thank you my friend for taking the time to read and comment on my write.

"Yes" in reply to your comment,"as it was meant to be"

Hope all is well for you

Sophia
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