Cascading landscapes and heartbreak, paint me a picture of you, a solid wall and by no means easy to see through.. A steady stream I will follow, All the days of my life and paint for me a picture, of loneliness and strife bittersweet memories carry me And all thru thine days and yet still leave me open, to what must surely be better days. Bittersweet memories although you, have left your mark upon my past.. Please paint for me a new picture Of beauty at long last.
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
An inspiration from some one special to me...I may still have to tweak this one.. :D
if they're hollow, you must know what you'd like to fill them with!
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 21, 2009
All of us dream and wish for better things, it's the hope I think that keeps us alive and going. you have expressed this to a point in your words, a message of hope maybe for all that want it, thankyou. Andrew xxx
dear poet QSF, WELL DONE AS YOU DO, "Bittersweet memories although you, have left your mark upon my past.. Please paint for me a new picture Of beauty at long long last"
Comments (16)
just love your soft expressions touched me so close
thank you for sharing
WELL DONE AS YOU DO,
"Bittersweet memories although you,
have left your mark upon my past..
Please paint for me a new picture
Of beauty at long long last"
THESE LINES ARE BEST ONES...
SABEEL.
and hope of things to come.