Bittersweet..

Cascading landscapes and heartbreak,
paint me a picture of you,
a solid wall and by no means
easy to see through..
A steady stream I will follow,
All the days of my life
and paint for me a picture,
of loneliness and strife
bittersweet memories carry me
And all thru thine days
and yet still leave me open,
to what must surely be better days.
Bittersweet memories although you,
have left your mark upon my past..
Please paint for me a new picture
Of beauty at long last.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
An inspiration from some one special to me...I may still have to tweak this one.. :D

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shhores
quietstorm
just love your soft expressions touched me so close
thank you for sharingteddybear
QuietStormF
Thanks shhores.. it was strange.. I asked Bentlee to give me one word to make a poem tonight.. and he said the same one I had in my mind all day.. daydream bouquet
Bentlee
I'm not sure how you do it, yet you do, the words expressively you've always got flowing :) keep it up:)
QuietStormF
Hollow dreams I reckon..sad flower
Bentlee
if they're hollow, you must know what you'd like to fill them with!
andrew149
All of us dream and wish for better things, it's the hope I think that keeps us alive and going. you have expressed this to a point in your words, a message of hope maybe for all that want it, thankyou. Andrew xxx
QuietStormF
Well yes.. I do have some idea Bentlee...hmmm flirty violin teddybear
QuietStormF
And thank-you Andrew!teddybear
poetengineer
my god, what a beautiful words , i want to thanks your inspiration too much cause it allow me to read such magic sweet words , thanks for share
QuietStormF
Thanks Poetengineerfor your words of praise!.. and I will pass on your thanks to the one who inspired it as well..teddybear
gypsyheart
Thank you QiuetStorm for sharing this poem with us.Beautifully written like all your othershug
QuietStormF
Thank-you Gypsyheart.. hug
sabeel
dear poet QSF,
WELL DONE AS YOU DO,
"Bittersweet memories although you,
have left your mark upon my past..
Please paint for me a new picture
Of beauty at long long last"

THESE LINES ARE BEST ONES...
SABEEL.
QuietStormF
Thank-you Sabeel.. I do too...teddybear
boyshchrm6
Extremely nice phrases
and hope of things to come.angel thumbs up wine hug handshake
QuietStormF
Thank-you boyshchrm6 and yes...hope is the greatest of motivators.. teddybear hug bouquet
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