Love is very powerful....and should not be taken lightly.... nice write....
ng970
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJan 11, 2011
"I am ripe for you Like a fruit kissed by the sun take me now before the autumn comes
please do not let me spoil do not wait for others to find me
those leaves brown and spent drop silently to the ground
My love"
Sophia. You say it....like no one else
DeathToHeroesDublin, IrelandJan 11, 2011
"Like a fruit kissed by the sun take me now before the autumn comes"
A really beautiful piece of poetry right there, I'm impressed.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJan 12, 2011
[Like a bulb in the cold dark ground my heart squeezing tears from my eyes]
exquisite phrases, and, i need a cold shower now...
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 12, 2011
Oh Sophia...truly heartfelt and wonderful...so sincere, how could any man resist. This has to be your best...Loved it. Reading it through again I can sense the pain behind the words... true poetry. Niah
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nice write....
ng970
Like a fruit kissed by the sun
take me now before the autumn comes
please
do not let me spoil
do not wait for others
to find me
those leaves brown and spent
drop silently to the ground
My love"
Sophia. You say it....like no one else
take me now before the autumn comes"
A really beautiful piece of poetry right there, I'm impressed.
exquisite phrases, and, i need a cold shower now...
This has to be your best...Loved it.
Reading it through again I can sense the pain behind the words... true poetry.
Niah
Tis truley a powerful thing.
Love Soph
xx
your comments always lay softley before me wrapped in encouragement. I thankyou.
Love Sophia
xx
I am humbled by your comments,
I smile!
Sophia
xx
What can I say, but yes I enjoyed feeling and writing this piece.
I thankyou as always, my favourite aussie!
Sophia
xx
EGT
Oh Gosh! a cold shower! the mind does wander, or should I say wonder!
xx thankyou
Sophia
Kia ora Niah!
I love that you enjoyed my poem, must be these glorious sunsets that arise up here in the north.
I thankyou
Sophia
xx