by sophiasummerNorthland, New Zealand
Jan 2011 1,057 Views 9 comments
"Kiwiana"
tena koutou katoa
there once was bloke from Aotearoa
who had an iron gut like a flightless moa
mutton birds his nightly meal
gorging with his river smoked eel
SS
there once was bloke from Aotearoa
who had an iron gut like a flightless moa
mutton birds his nightly meal
gorging with his river smoked eel
SS
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
my first attempt...lol!SS
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Comments (9)
good luck and good first try hun!
I actually found it quite hard, as im not used to structure..lol!
Glad you put forward a limerick weekend, as it opens up different channels for me to learn.
Love Soph
xx
its very new to me...
hope all is well with you..
Im enjoying whangaparoa!!!
Love Soph
xx
Dear Mr. Macduff, I think i know >> What tena koutou katoa mean. << ^__^ but I don't know the rest.LOL
Kiwiana => Kiwi => kiwiana => NZ
tena kootoo katoa => welcome to you all, my greeting to everyone.. hello everybody
Aotearoa => shooooooot
COOL combination LIMERICK !!!THUMB UP Up uP up Uppp))))
I'd hate to meet the feller you wrote about, he sounds like someone you wouldn't want to tangle with in a dark alley.
So when he woke in the morn
to the toilet he'd adjourn
and adorn the bowl with skin and feathers