by thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida, USA
Jan 2011 1,224 Views 11 comments
IT'S COMPLICATED ( A Palindrome)
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Do not run
Do not go
Do not do it
You said.
But I wanted to
I said.
And what to do now
I don't know how
--=-=-=-=-=--
IT'S COMPLICATED
--=-=-=-=-=--
I don't know how
And what to do now
I said,
But I wanted to.
You said,
Do not do it
Do not go
Do not run.
--=-=-=-=-=--
Do not run
Do not go
Do not do it
You said.
But I wanted to
I said.
And what to do now
I don't know how
--=-=-=-=-=--
IT'S COMPLICATED
--=-=-=-=-=--
I don't know how
And what to do now
I said,
But I wanted to.
You said,
Do not do it
Do not go
Do not run.
--=-=-=-=-=--
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
^_^ Is this called, "Palindrome" ehh..??? Somebody please tell me the truth. >_</ pleaseeee..pleaseeee... No need to be afraid to hurt me or my feeling. I'm tough than you think . lol I'm not that soft and sweet as my face. LOL So now tell me if this is Palindrome or just a Poem (free verse)? Thank you very much for your time reading my poem. XXX ^__^PS. MacDuff wake up already? :-O
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Comments (11)
I have mailed you with a little info on Palindromes, but Mr Macduff is the expert, and I am sure he will reply to this thread whenever he gets the chance.
This is I think, a mirror image poem, I don't know if there is a technical name for it. But if not, perhaps we could invent a name - how about a "Jib"?
Best wishes
Bill x
err...would you like to check out my another Palindrome? You will see how TALENT I am! lol
Thesunandsea
Well, apparently, it is complicated! Perhaps one day I will have time to delve more into poetic forms. But I wanted to I said. I admire you taking the time to experiment!
Heeheeehee I know your main purpose for coming here is to read my comment right? and after that you read my poem later… LOL
^___^ Heehehee I’m glad to see you too. Your face is cute and I can look at your image for a whole day without boring… ^___^ I Have SO MANY imagination how your face would be …lol
Thank you for your cute comment as always. ^___________^ next time drop me your cute face, you’d be cuter, and I’d be so glad… heehee
Thank you very much for your nice comment and for your time reading my poem. I’m SOOO HAPPY)))
PS. you’ve got mail! But it is blocked then it is now in your filter box…box filter… mail blocked, blocked mail…
She has also asked for advice on iambic pentameter so she can have a go at writing sonnets. She has also asked about villanelles and terzanelles.
If you think formally structured poetry can be called anything you want, then good luck to you. But it's pretty clear why you have to use Vanity publishers.
Regards
Fellsman