I gotta go CRY

Feb 2011 612 Views 7 comments

I gotta go ----> CRY

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I am not gonna be mad at you,

I have no right to do.

I am not gonna be mad at you,

I know you didn't mean to.

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I am not gonna be mad at you,

for that you made me blue.

I am not gonna be mad at you,

for that you didn't give me a clue.

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But next time,

please don't give me hope.

I can't cope,

with a lie.

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I am not mad,

but

I am sad.

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Now

Have a nice day!

And

Bye!

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For me,

I gotta go

cry!

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Ps. I don't understand why why why... People like to tell a lie...

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Posted: Feb 2011

About this poem:

Inspired by my friend, she cried cus someone broke the promise. so thats it. \-(>__<)-/
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When someone promised you that they would do something for you and you totally believed it. BUT they couldn't do it finally. Is it sad, isn't it?

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Comments (7)

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 20, 2011

Dear Jib

When the bond of trust is broken, there is nothing left. This is a plaintive and heartfelt cry from someone who has been hurt.

You conveyed the emotion very well.

Regards

Bill

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 20, 2011

Sas, what can I say, relationships and love is what makes the world go around. Broken promises or belief that there is something between two people that then goes awry is also part of life's experiences. Don't cry. Just move on.

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaFeb 20, 2011

Trust and promises must be a two way street. Sometimes we can be forgiving if someone is hit by a bus and goes to hospital, but otherwise they should say what they mean and carry thru. To some life is like a diode...everything one way in their favour being very selfish. TY

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAFeb 20, 2011

S.A.S., what can i say that others haven't already, time will heal. ;-]

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAFeb 26, 2011

Thank you Mr. BM : ) If the one is hit by a bus and goes to the hosp… That’s acceptable...

for this case, the one has another girl with him and that keeps him busy and forgets everything… that’s it… LOL but however, it’s ok... Everything is under controlled now... I told my friend to step back and fade away… LOL ^___^ XXXXX LOL

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAFeb 26, 2011

Habibiiiiii )))) Thank you Swannn))))

^_^ Guess what, my friend saw your pic and she said,

“woowwww how beautiful she is!!!”

^_^ I’m so proud of you really!!! Heeeheee ^____^

Thank you again for your comment and yeahh my friend hugged you back!!!! Heehee… ^___^ I’m happy I have you as my sweet lil sis… Habibi…

thesunandtheseaOPTampa, Florida USAFeb 26, 2011

MR. GG. Thank you sooo much….. what can you say that the others haven’t said ??? mmmm……. Say “SaS, you look soooooooooo beautiful today!!!! “ LOLOLOL