If only dreams would all come true. Instead of here I’d be there with you. To hold you near the whole day through. And keep you safe the night time too.
If only you were not so far away. Entwined in your arms I would stay. But here all alone in my bed I lay. Wishing that tomorrow could be today.
If only these days would quickly pass by. You would be here and no more would I cry. But if dreams come true then I’ll know why. We’ll soon be together just you and I.
If only we could control time, but whilst waiting I offer you a
grandadOPKilmorna, Kerry IrelandMar 10, 2011
TY redex but I only drink my round I believe
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 10, 2011
A plaintive cri de coeur, Grandad - great rhyming...
Regards Bill
grandadOPKilmorna, Kerry IrelandMar 10, 2011
Thanks Bill, there are times when you want things 'now' and other times, like 'old age', they're here too quickly.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 10, 2011
If only these days would quickly pass by. You would be here and no more would I cry. But if dreams come true then I’ll know why. We’ll soon be together just you and I.
Lovely romantic poem. We spend our live's saying with only.
BuffybearWYONG, New South Wales AustraliaMar 10, 2011
Hey grandad - this felt as if you were talking about ME! how beautifully rhymed and thought out.... Buff
silentspringFjälkinge, Skane SwedenMar 10, 2011
Oh..if only...
I was being loved that way.
A romantic and wonderful poem. Allowing the reader to sense the yearning. I too hope time quickly will pass by.
It is a beautiful poem. And it is so true, when your someone is far away.
grandadOPKilmorna, Kerry IrelandMar 10, 2011
Odette my dreams will soon become a reality, wont they Silentspring? Buffybear I'm sure you have your hands full with that 'kitty kat' you have there. Thank you all for your kind comments.
bevbelleBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMar 21, 2011
Yes, I know 'That Feeling.' You are Truly A Romantic at Heart. Won't have long to wait. I Wish You and Your Love --A Happy Future.' Bevbelle
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Regards Bill
You would be here and no more would I cry.
But if dreams come true then I’ll know why.
We’ll soon be together just you and I.
Lovely romantic poem. We spend our live's saying with only.
I was being loved that way.
A romantic and wonderful poem. Allowing the reader to sense the yearning. I too hope time quickly will pass by.
Thank you all for your kind comments.
You are Truly A Romantic at Heart.
Won't have long to wait.
I Wish You and Your Love --A Happy Future.'
Bevbelle