A Vow for all to witness.

These words I write, though eloquent as not of Shakespeare.
Nor have they rhythm and depth those great poets mastered.
But they come with humble testimony to bear for one I hold so dear.
With unconditioned love this path with her I walk which once I feared.

Who would have yet thought it possible yes to love again?
As life had shown no mercy given when hearts were broken.
I with deepening sorrows failed to dull this yearning pain.
Yet now I feel a need again to live, my soul had been awoken.

I have no words to speak or write that make sense this happening.
No mortal mind could comprehend those unspoken words that fail me.
It is enough I know though words alone can not express this feeling.
So pledge I do for all who hear, this love be yours for all eternity.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
How I feel and will always feel.

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Comments (8)

silentspring
It does take someone special to awake love that has fallen into deep sleep. It is a wonderful thing when it happens though, I know, as I have experienced the very same awakening, and know in my heart this to be the most beautifully shining star in the sky of my life. angel2

An open and wonderful poem, allows me to touch your soul, I am very happy for you grandad.....happy for myself as well....happy for us that is. hug bouquet hug
andrew149
A beautiful poem Grandad, you are both very lucky people, though you don't need me to tell you that.....Kindest regards...Andrew...cool
Fellsman
Hi Grandad

A classy, and indeed eloquent write - Wishing you and yours a very happy future.

Regards

Bill wine wine
pilgrimageoflove
grandad
your poetry is beautiful with rhytm and depth and lots of emotion.
thesunandthesea
OHHHHH---- your poem has made me cry!!! crying crying crying I LOVED IT!!!! this is SOOOO BEAUTIFUL))))) All's written with simple words ( I dont need to open my dict!! sooooo glad!!blushing lol) AND.. it's deep, touching, loving and sweet.
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Dear Grandad, if she reads this, she will be yours for eternity, I am sure!!!!
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grandad
I am encouraged by so many generous comments TY so very much.
Andrew, Bill, Pilgrim cheers handshake
Jib what can I say to you? teddybear bouquet
thesunandthesea
I dont need any word!!! I need VELSI! blushing
gnj4u
Hi, grandad,
Yet now I feel a need again to live, my soul had been awoken. Thank you for sharing A Vow for all to witness. with us! Here's to love No mortal mind could comprehend and an eternity of happiness!
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