If You

IF you could see the way I feel,
if you could find my heart to steal.
If you could fly through stormy clouds
to escape the humdrum of the crowds
If you can dare your dreams to find
while keeping reality clear in mind
If you could touch the stars above,
acknowledge a desire for true love.
Then you will enter this world of mine.
where you can stay the longest time.
A place where the stars begin to glow
In twilight moments we won’t let go
I’d hold you close in warm embrace
And lift you up to a higher place
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Posted: Apr 2011

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Comments (14)

moonontide
Truly, I love this Orpheus.
We must dare and we must acknowledge a desire to love.teddybear
0rpheus
Thank you moontide

I'm pleased that you like my short poem.

kiss bouquet
Intelligentsia
Quite an emotional write, I wondered about steel in line two as it could be taken two ways as in steel or steal, but I found good feelings in this piece.
0rpheus
Thank you Intelligentsia

You are correct, I had made a spelling mistake in line two which thanks to you I have now corrected. handshake I'm pleased that you enjoyed my write.
mcradloff
It sounds like England is crowded and cloudy. Nice write!cheers bunny
0rpheus
Thanks mcradloff

England always seems to be cloudy, some things never change.
cheers
Macduff5
A lovely poem...very romantic. Thanks for sharing. wine
Fellsman
A fine romantic write, Orpheus...

Regards

Bill wine
0rpheus
Thank you macduff cheers
0rpheus
Cheers Bill. cheers
jeddah12
A place where the stars begin to glow
In twilight moments we won’t let go
I’d hold you close in warm embrace
And lift you up to a higher place

wow..stunningly romantic sir,,very very nice poem indeed;;keep 'em' coming..i enjoy this one;;thanks a lot;wine handshake
niah9
Lovely write...sincere....heart felt...Niahgrin teddybear
0rpheus
Thanks Jeddah

I certainly seem to be striking a chord with your good self hug

I'm pleased you like my romantic writes.dancing

kiss
0rpheus
Thank you Niah hug kiss
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