IF you could see the way I feel, if you could find my heart to steal. If you could fly through stormy clouds to escape the humdrum of the crowds If you can dare your dreams to find while keeping reality clear in mind If you could touch the stars above, acknowledge a desire for true love. Then you will enter this world of mine. where you can stay the longest time. A place where the stars begin to glow In twilight moments we won’t let go I’d hold you close in warm embrace And lift you up to a higher place
moonontideSydney, New South Wales AustraliaApr 5, 2011
Truly, I love this Orpheus. We must dare and we must acknowledge a desire to love.
0rpheusOPSomewhere in, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKApr 5, 2011
Thank you moontide
I'm pleased that you like my short poem.
IntelligentsiaValencia, SpainApr 5, 2011
Quite an emotional write, I wondered about steel in line two as it could be taken two ways as in steel or steal, but I found good feelings in this piece.
0rpheusOPSomewhere in, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKApr 5, 2011
Thank you Intelligentsia
You are correct, I had made a spelling mistake in line two which thanks to you I have now corrected. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my write.
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We must dare and we must acknowledge a desire to love.
I'm pleased that you like my short poem.
You are correct, I had made a spelling mistake in line two which thanks to you I have now corrected. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my write.
England always seems to be cloudy, some things never change.
Regards
Bill
In twilight moments we won’t let go
I’d hold you close in warm embrace
And lift you up to a higher place
wow..stunningly romantic sir,,very very nice poem indeed;;keep 'em' coming..i enjoy this one;;thanks a lot;
I certainly seem to be striking a chord with your good self
I'm pleased you like my romantic writes.