Destiny

Swirling up into the sky, escaping from the abyss of the alibis.
Memories inprisoned by walls of stone.
Words sprouting as if cast out of devils home.
Years and years claimed its ground.
Roots reaching to claim their destiny.
Through territory of times that are gone.
Traveling sometimes entwined sometimes alone.
Standing unshook while winds beat it with their souls.
Summer comes with colors green covering bare limbs.
Oak tree standing proud facing morning sun.
Thanks to wind for leaves and nuts that came undone.
Little oak growing by its side.
Destiny.
The rains cried!!!
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
The road in life is not always full of sunshine and happiness but it is our journey to our destiny.

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swade777
This is a very 'pretty' poem! I love the selection of phrases you've compiled to compose it!! thumbs up
Redex
So true and wonderfully putpeace teddybear
Poetnumber1
Lovel indeed,some beautiful phrases you used,loved itcheering cool
Earlgreytea
[Words sprouting as if cast out of devils home]

very striking phrase... bouquet
Happygolucky4u
Awww thanks swade. I don't know about it being pretty blushing but it sure was fun to write. One of those poems that had been living in me for a few days. Wanting to get out.laugh
Ladybee42
I like the way you said that Happy - what is is and our life is our journey to our destiny. Thanks for sharing these thoughts.

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Happygolucky4u
Thank you redex bouquet I have no idea why but for some reason this poem is special to me. I could break down every sentence and tell you what it meant to me. They all meant something but yet the thoughts behind them flowed togetherwave
Happygolucky4u
Thank you poetnumber1 for reading and commenting on my poem. I almost had forgotten about it. Then I read a poem this morning that reminded we need the rain to grow. So I looked to reread this one. I sure am slow at thank yous for comments but I really am glad for the comments I get blues wave
bungallow55
Happy,I like this poem...it reminds me that still
haven't found my destiny...I wonder if there is
one for me..."Roots reaching to claim their destiny"
could it be me?...who knows.teddybear
Happygolucky4u
Thank you earlgreytea...yes word being cast out of there are some powerfull words. Thank you for reading my poem bouquet
Fellsman
Hi Happy


A fine write, enjoyed it...


Bill wine wine
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