Handsome Nell

O, once I lov'd a bonie lass,
Ay, and I love her still!
And whilst that virtue warms my breast,
I'll love my handsome Nell.

As bonie lasses I hae seen,
And monie full as braw,
But for a modest gracefu' mien
The like I never saw.

A bonie lass, I will confess,
Is pleasant to the e'e;
But without some better qualities
She's no a lass for me.

But Nelly's looks are blythe and sweet,
And, what is best of a',
Her reputation is complete
and fair without a flaw.

She dresses ay sae clean and neat,
Both decent and genteel;
And then there's something in her gait
Gars onie dress look weel.

A gaudy dress and gentle air
May slightly touch the heart;
But it's innocence and modesty
That polishes the dart.

'Tis this in Nelly pleases me,
'Tis this enchants my soul;
For absolutely in my breast
She reigns without controul.
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Posted: Oct 2011
About this poem:
this is the first poem Robert Burns wrote at the age of fifteen and the subject fouteen year old Nelly Kilpatrick, the daughter of a blacksmith near Mount Oliphant.
It was written in the autumn of 1773.

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localpoet
At fifteen is it any surprise it was love that inspired Burns to write his first poem?
Poetnumber1
A lovely poem LocalPoet,the picture painted and the lyrics therein,very goodcheers
Fellsman
Hi local


I am a fan of Rabbie Burns. Some years ago when holidaying in Ayrshire with one of the poetesses from Poetry Corner, we visited his cottage in Alloway. Speaking from memory, I believe that is where he wrote his poem Tam O'Shanter.

Whereas I do find some of Burns' poetry fairly hard going, some of his poems such as To a mouse and To a haggis are classics, and Afton Water and The Banks O' Doon are amongst my favourite Burns' reads.

I enjoyed this poem...


Best wishes

Bill wine wine
thelmatalla
Lovely classic old English poem. Thanks dear Localpoet for posting this piece.bouquet bouquet teddybear
localpoet
Robert Burns is Scottish!
and famously wrote in Scottish dialect!
He was theatened with imprisonment and possible execution for his political writings by the English powers.
thelmatalla
Oh yes, thanks for the emphasis on that. Robert Burns, an icon in poetry is the national poet of Scotland. But he had written standard classic English poetry. Appreciate his poem.bouquet teddybear
Odette67
Lovely poem from one of my adored poets..thank you for sharing.purple heart
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