Here I am, once again,talking to you as if your my friend. Alone of course, no other way it has been I don't think I am sad,I don't feel so blue So do not worry about me this time I am finding my way, helped along by this ryhme.
It has been a while almost a year, since I last wrote anything of cheer, this does not mean, I do not care, I just have not had anything to share,
I hope you are all well, in life and in love And comfortable in life like a hand in a glove, We must keep in touch with our life and our friends, Nobody likes it when frendships do end,
You are a friend to me did you know? I am sorry? I did not tell you so, When I write these things on here, I hope for you good health and cheer!
May life treat you well! be happy not sad! This is a choice we have! I am glad! To say to you this day it's true! Happy to have a friend in YOU!
The sky was so cloudy - I thought - It would rain ... ... but suddenly a sunray came out of the blue ... ... it's shining so delicate , warming and brightening , and calling us friends - I wonder : Me too ?!
This is what I felt reading your poem ,LOCALPOET ! Thank you !
Sky
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 9, 2013
Hi there localpoet What a lovely Title for a poem... Beautiful write loved reading... and its so nice to have friends who are on the same page in a the same corner of minds. Thank you for posting
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeFeb 9, 2013
local poet what class your simple poem is so universal and fitting to just about everyone here in fact should be the lead poem of all by right you should be flooded with messages coz it is effective to reaching all poets! on behalf of all poets I salute you with respect and honour and I have not read youth poems before so I also welcome you to poets corner my esteem fellow poet
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 9, 2013
This piece is a breath of fresh air,refreshing in its entirety.Nice to see you Local.
localpoetOPCannock, Staffordshire, England UKFeb 11, 2013
good to be back no1! and thank you for reading.
localpoetOPCannock, Staffordshire, England UKFeb 11, 2013
thank you morgen 90210 I am glad you enjoyed the read.
localpoetOPCannock, Staffordshire, England UKFeb 11, 2013
rapturecapture it is so nice to be on the same page with uou!
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKFeb 11, 2013
Welcome back to the corner again Localpoet Though I do not know you,I enjoyed your poem..as Poet1 had said..its a breath of fresh air.. here's to "Unknown Friends"
localpoetOPCannock, Staffordshire, England UKFeb 11, 2013
thank you sky! what a wonderful reply!
localpoetOPCannock, Staffordshire, England UKFeb 11, 2013
thank you ladymorgana60! I do have a feeling of being welcomed home from all the comments!
Comments (15)
I thought -
It would rain ...
... but suddenly a sunray
came out of the blue ...
... it's shining so delicate ,
warming and brightening ,
and calling us friends -
I wonder : Me too ?!
This is what I felt reading your poem ,LOCALPOET !
Thank you !
Sky
What a lovely Title for a poem...
Beautiful write loved reading... and its so nice to have friends who are on the same page in a the same corner of minds.
Thank you for posting
is so universal and fitting to just about
everyone here
in fact should be the lead poem of all
by right you should be flooded with messages coz it is effective to reaching all poets!
on behalf of all poets I salute you with respect and honour and
I have not read youth poems before
so I also welcome you to poets corner
my esteem fellow poet
and thank you for reading.
I am glad you enjoyed the read.
Though I do not know you,I enjoyed your poem..as Poet1 had said..its a breath of fresh air.. here's to "Unknown Friends"
what a wonderful reply!
I do have a feeling of being welcomed home from all the comments!
Ty
thank you for your comment!