Their minds thought evil Their lips spoke lies Their eyes saw corruption Their ears heard gossip And their hearts knew death They would not be conformed Could not be reasoned with They had no pity Knew no compassion Showed no mercy They spat hatred on the gentle heart Violent cursings tore from their throats Blood lust was their morning drink Their fists hammered revenge Their malice poisoned the air The earth fled from their presence The pit opened up to them A horor beyond imagining awaited them The father of lies greeted them The gates of Hell opened and they were forced through at the speed of light They beheld the horror of every vile thing They were chained to a dung heap more vile than the stench of a trillion dead Every evil that could be thought or dreamed chained them within the blazing infernal a billion suns and tormented them forever There was no release There shall be no release Screaming for all eternity Screaming in the fire Screaming in the blistering torture of a burning that shall never end The Hell of all Hells The blackest dark, thick as dead black steel cutting their heart out Their souls being ripped in bloody torture yet they can never die They cannot die!! They shall never die!! Forever they will know only the firey sword of the flames of wrath
WOW!!! this is something else cafe...I think I will say an extra prayer tonight.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 15, 2011
Ty Mr. Fellsman..' Those who start wars, murder children, and create a world of havoc are children of hell whether they know it or not..believe it or not. People who use religion to murder have their fates sealed in hell. However people may view judgement or punishment God made one thing very clear to us despite all our preconceptions. "No liar or murderer has eternal life dwelling in them." God is love but he will kill a soul in a heartbeat because he cannot and will not live with a lie.
I was waiting for a punchline CafeTwo but this one sent chills up my spine without any comic relief. A fine write. I'm gonna slap that little devil right off my shoulder. He only tells me the good stuff.
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaOct 16, 2011
Hi Cafe,
When I looked at your title it conjured up thoughts of that famous song "The Eve Of Destruction". Your description in this is phenomenal. It sums up evil very powerfully.
And they will be begging for death and will not be granted death. The picture is so vivid I felt the unspeakable heat of fiery pit and unthinkable torment of heart being cut out for ever and ever. Better all of them to whom it concerns read and consider for as long as it dawns upon them that all the above is for real. A powerful descriptive write with convincing argumentation! Thank you, Cafe, for sharing!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 16, 2011
Ty Mac..' I think it no accident that this type of language has been around for centries. The natural peace of man is always inherant in good constructive thoughts and equality of all persons while an evil nature is quite alien to our natural disposition and counter productive to the good of all. I can't imagine the great tyrants of history coming into this world and reeking mass destruction and then passing away without judgement. Even our small acts of unkindness can have tremendous negative effects.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 16, 2011
Ty Marikia..'People choose not to retain God in their knowledge and when that happens the world is exposed to a dangerous mentality. That mentality started World War I, and people thought that was the war to end all wars until World War II came knocking. People who won't fight for what is right will find themselves dragged to the battlefield with or without a weapon.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAOct 16, 2011
Ty Marikia..'People choose not to retain God in their knowledge and when that happens the world is exposed to a dangerous mentality. That mentality started World War I, and people thought that was the war to end all wars until World War II came knocking. People who won't fight for what is right will find themselves dragged to the battlefield with or without a weapon.
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 6, 2014
I felt this might be a good companion piece for your current poem-
Cat
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 6, 2014
Cat.. Thank you Cat master. I'm extending your nine lives to at least 24. That's so we can still read your great comments. Lockless
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 6, 2014
Thanks! And you're very welcome, Lockless(haven't they started growing back yet? )
Cat
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 6, 2014
Cateth.. I believe the locks are returning. All maidens be on guard. For thy monarch shall rise again. I'm talking about hair of course. O behave thy wayward monarch!
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandSep 6, 2014
Powerful write Cafe. Kinght of Peace. ---- IMAGE REMOVED because photobucket.com no longer allows embedded images ----
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chills up my spine without any comic relief. A fine write.
I'm gonna slap that little devil right off my shoulder. He
only tells me the good stuff.
When I looked at your title it conjured up thoughts of that famous song "The Eve Of Destruction". Your description in this is phenomenal. It sums up evil very powerfully.
Cat
24. That's so we can still read your great comments.
Lockless
Cat
For thy monarch shall rise again. I'm talking about hair of course.
O behave thy wayward monarch!
Kinght of Peace.
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