YOU

by DementiaBelmont, Mississippi, USA

Sep 2009 913 Views 14 comments

YOU

you are my moon
you are my star
you are the love
that flows within my heart
you are my sun
on a cloudy day
you are my shelter
when it starts to rain
and just when i give up
you become my voice
constantly reminding me
that i have a choice
you are my window
you help me to see
that we belong together
just you and me

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Sep 2009

About this poem:

I wrote this poem because this is what i'm looking for in a person. Someone who could become my everything.

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Comments (14)

DARKDESIRE87new york, New York USASep 22, 2009

THAT WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL.I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL.I WANT THAT SAME FEELING TO COME BACK FOR ME...BUT VERY NICE

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 22, 2009

thankyou for a good poem, y'now if you stick around in poets corner, and keep writing, you may be surprised in what you will find, I was, and very pleasantly too........andrew.

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaSep 22, 2009

really it is beautiful poem cause it have honest feelings , thanks for share

sabeelcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaSep 22, 2009

dear poet Dementia,

welcome poet...
and thanks for the share of a good poem...
sabeel.

SunnnValletta, Majjistral MaltaSep 23, 2009

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainSep 23, 2009

true Dementia,
Its a dream we all share, hope it comes true for you
Rob

jazzy75Houston, Texas USASep 23, 2009

Dementia...nicely written. Can't wait to read more.

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 23, 2009

A beautiful poem Dementia-i wish you all the luck in finding her

DementiaOPBelmont, Mississippi USAFeb 4, 2013

this was the first poem I ever posted on here and I would like to thank all of you for your comments. deeply appreciated.
Sincerely,
Mykal

EwokyMelboune, Victoria AustraliaFeb 4, 2013

Awesome poem, genuine, hopeful and it flows
I like the simple call in it.
very romantic.

Thankyou, i do hope youve found what your looking for, or if not that you do find your special one soon.