Walking along the shore!
Author: Unknown
I walked the shore, along the sand. This beautifull place, was given to man.
I walked along the edge of the water,for life is so long,and i've only lived a quarter.
Walking in further, up to my knees,I feel the cold chill of the deep blue sea.
Walking in further up to my thighs,for love and affection, unheard went my cries.
Life is so cold, like the water i stand,people too cruel, to lend me a hand.
Walking in further ,up to my waist,the times we've spent will now be erased.
Walking in further up to my shoulders,of living in life, i'm one of the holders.
Walking in further, up to my ears,the pains deep inside but my eyes shed no tears.
Walking in further, covering my eyes,i no longer see, or hear peoples cries.
Walking in further over my head,for life was so hard, but now i am dead.
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
Oh boy...same time frame,around the age of 16. I suppose i may have been alittle suicidle, but dont remember,feeling THAT bad. (hind site) i suppose.Anyway...i'm much happier today.
Comments (10)
Well written and fortunately the end was fiction.
The world is better with you in it
Truly nice and its good you are still here JG.