Ther was a special somone,who made me feel like gold: and when our dream world ended, the tears were hard to hold. We shared a special gift, thats forbidden from above: But the gift we gave each other, was given out of love. Our talks and times together, and walks out in the rain: Left a scar of past by memories, and a heart thats filled with pain. That certain day we talked, i knew that i'dd soon cry: For silence enveloped our thoughts, and this was our goodbye.
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
I wrote this poem at the age of 15. My heart was broken, and the pain so great. What a terrible time in my life.
Dearest You have touched my heart with this poem I think you are special I was also hurt and it was a difficult time for me I pray to God everyday Keep the faith be my friend always blessings Pete
poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaSep 22, 2009
really very honest sensitive words , it touched me . thanks for share
jerseygirl49OPPetersburg, Virginia USASep 23, 2009
Thank you Ironman..and poetengineer, for your kind words. nancy
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 24, 2009
I think you are a special person jerseygirl49.Very sad but beautiful poem.Thank you for sharing
maverick6732Richmond, Virginia USASep 30, 2009
Young hearts are the tenderest and pure, no foolish ideas of what is supposed to be sure, just honest heart felt as pure as a dove.
I found myself in this poem, as I had unrequited love for a young lady, she never new the joy she gave and the pain I felt when I realized it would never come true.
Comments (13)
You have touched my heart with this poem
I think you are special
I was also hurt and it was a difficult time for me
I pray to God everyday
Keep the faith
be my friend
always
blessings
Pete
I found myself in this poem, as I had unrequited love for a young lady, she never new the joy she gave and the pain I felt when I realized it would never come true.
You have an open soul jerseygirl
Great stuff.
Rob