A special someone

Ther was a special somone,who made me feel like gold:
and when our dream world ended, the tears were hard to hold.
We shared a special gift, thats forbidden from above:
But the gift we gave each other, was given out of love.
Our talks and times together, and walks out in the rain:
Left a scar of past by memories, and a heart thats filled with pain.
That certain day we talked, i knew that i'dd soon cry:
For silence enveloped our thoughts, and this was our goodbye.
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
I wrote this poem at the age of 15. My heart was broken, and the pain so great. What a terrible time in my life.

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ironman
Dearest
You have touched my heart with this poem
I think you are special
I was also hurt and it was a difficult time for me
I pray to God everyday
Keep the faith
be my friend
always
blessings
Pete
poetengineer
really very honest sensitive words , it touched me . thanks for share
jerseygirl49
Thank you Ironman..and poetengineer, for your kind words. nancybouquet
QuietStormF
Thanks for sharing.. young love hurts too... hug teddybear
gypsyheart
I think you are a special person jerseygirl49.Very sad but beautiful poem.Thank you for sharinghug bouquet
maverick6732
Young hearts are the tenderest and pure, no foolish ideas of what is supposed to be sure, just honest heart felt as pure as a dove.

I found myself in this poem, as I had unrequited love for a young lady, she never new the joy she gave and the pain I felt when I realized it would never come true.

You have an open soul jerseygirl
jerseygirl49
Thanx maverick, glad you liked it.comfort
boyshchrm6
Well written,but sad. From the heart.
Great stuff.cool angel
trurorob
some nice guy is going to be very lucky with you my friend
Rob
jerseygirl49
Speacial thank you to..boyshchrm6, and trurorob for your kind comment.And to any one else that i'm leaving out..god bless you for just being hereteddybear hug
Tiger_Dan
very nice!
jerseygirl49
Neo..I knew you could relate to my pain..thanx my friend. And yes the scars....they live as long as we do.JG wave teddybear comfort
jerseygirl49
Thanx tiger dan, for your comment. JGwave
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