The Afterlife

Got on the same clothes
from the night before;
just picked myself
off the floor.

When you left it cut like a knife;
drank myself silly
practicing for the afterlife.

We had a good thing, baby
but you don’t care.
It’s time to move on,
but I miss you there.

Another cold shoulder,
another lie,
as I grow older,
here’s mud in your eye.

You don’t have to love me;
give me false hope;
the future we had
has gone up in smoke.

Life’s a moving target
and I’m a good shot;
won’t get hurt again
because...
I’m well taught.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
Here's mud in your eye.

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steve1223
Nice write....here's wine
mcradloff
Here's mud in your eye, sounds like a western saying, something Clint Eastwood would say. I thought this poem would be about life after death, it's really about life after a relationship. Good write.teddybear
Fellsman
There are times when simple home-spun philosophy is far more relevant than any of the high blown rhetoric of the so-called great thinkers. You seem to have all the right answers to this would-be crisis... a fine write.

Best wishes

Bill gift wine
SundaySilence
Thank you guys. I have been stung enough to live by a different set of rules. Here's to mud in your eye. cheers
jazzy75
Powerful write SundaySilence....good shot!
cafetwo2010
Wow! This is vintage Sunday..A glass of wine..a kiss on the cheek..and a sweet bedtime story for you dear. Tommorrow we go fishing!professor kiss kiss teddybear
reguiny2006
Reading this reminded me somewhat what the younger generation now say, 'life's a pox, then you die', bit like requited love!

Phil.
cherryreggae
Really cool poem!!! Enjoyed reading it thanksapplause handshake cheers
Earlgreytea
[drank myself silly
practicing for the afterlife.]

this really tickled my funny bone, thanks for sharing dear soul...
love and light...
SundaySilence
Thank you, this kind of crap doesn't happen to me any more. It's all in fun.peace
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