Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 16, 2012
This is a really hard topic to write on,especially if you are one not to familiar with martial arts.But you have met the challenge well,im seeing a failed attempt in my try cheers M.M
mubodjOPlondon, Greater London, England UKJul 16, 2012
Thanks poetnumber1, I just made an attempt
mubodjOPlondon, Greater London, England UKJul 16, 2012
Thanks Lucy1777!
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJul 16, 2012
As one that has attended many MMA (Mixed Martial Arts) cage fights, I can say that you've captured the essence of a fighters environment and the Spirit of his mood quite well with your contribution!
The graphic nature of your writing is powerful having been accomplished with so few words! I'd say you're a qualified contender!!! I'll be sitting ringside!
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJul 17, 2012
Ancient Bullman says...an attempt at failure leads not to more failure but road to a champion!
mubodjOPlondon, Greater London, England UKJul 17, 2012
Thanks swade777!, Your comment is well appreciated
mubodjOPlondon, Greater London, England UKJul 17, 2012
Thanks morgen90210! your adage is well noted.
loriilondon, Greater London, England UKJul 17, 2012
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The graphic nature of your writing is powerful having been accomplished with so few words! I'd say you're a qualified contender!!! I'll be sitting ringside!
With fury they clash
All in attempt to victory
Well made in physique
In motion thus adrenalin
For here now to finish
All that runs the ego
Thanks for trying ;) I like your choice of words...