Martial Arts (a response to soulgodess)

With fury they clash
All in attempt to victory
Well made in physique
In motion thus adrenalin
For here now to finish
All that runs the ego

In fist lies thy power
And in legs retain thy strength
For to swiftness depends thy motion
Thus thy head in calculation
Of thy next move

Hit me when you can
For I retain no mercy
Strike when hot
For no coolness to motion
Thus to last man standing
Our rules and our game
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
In response to soulgodess challenge on the poem ''Martial Arts''. I just tried to give it a try, please pardon my lapses!

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Poetnumber1
This is a really hard topic to write on,especially if you are one not to familiar with martial arts.But you have met the challenge well,im seeing a failed attempt in my trylaugh cheerscheers M.M
lucy1777
This is good! applause
mubodj
Thanks poetnumber1, I just made an attemptcheers
mubodj
Thanks Lucy1777!handshake
swade777
As one that has attended many MMA (Mixed Martial Arts) cage fights, I can say that you've captured the essence of a fighters environment and the Spirit of his mood quite well with your contribution!

The graphic nature of your writing is powerful having been accomplished with so few words! I'd say you're a qualified contender!!! I'll be sitting ringside! boxing
morgen90210
Ancient Bullman says...an attempt at failure leads not to more failure but road to a champion! hug
mubodj
Thanks swade777!, Your comment is well appreciatedhandshake
mubodj
Thanks morgen90210! your adage is well noted.hug
lorii
The last stanza flows so well :)
soulgoddess
Quote:
With fury they clash
All in attempt to victory
Well made in physique
In motion thus adrenalin
For here now to finish
All that runs the ego


Thanks for trying ;) I like your choice of words...
mubodj
Thanks soulgoddess! you inspire the writinghandshake
mubodj
Thanks lorii! your observation well notedhandshake
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