I never met you on that date, we never connected it wasn't great. We didn't talk The night away, we didn't really have much to say. We never laughed at each others jokes. There was no eye contact or chemistry at all. You weren't handsome, you weren't the one. I wasn't pretty enough.. for any fun. I felt nothing when I was with you. I know you felt the same way to. We never hugged much Or kissed, there really wasn't much of this. There was no passion for neither of us, we didn't yearn for each others touch. We weren't sad when we said goodbye, not a tear drop or even a good cry. I wonder why???? Actually not a word thus far, is the truth!!!!! But it has to be, because I'm forgotten by you!!!
Great poem. Sometimes people can't see what's right in front of them and are always looking for more when the truth is those people usually lose the one person that could have made them happy. Loved this poem
Thanks so much Paloma....really appreciate your comment
Krc_1988Highland, Arkansas USAFeb 21, 2013
Lol. Nice one!!! Too funny and sounds like the dates I've been getting.
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAFeb 21, 2013
My dear sister, I don't know how I have missed this...But I sure glad it came over one more time..
Love it my dear...a scenario that seems so ordinary yet..like jena massie said: THE END IS JUST FABULOUSLY EARTHQUAKELY (?) TREMBLING....LOVE IT MY FRIEND..
Hi Jesse....thanks so much for that lovely comment.....It was written awhile back, but it was forgotten lol but resurfaced....glad you liked it Ty.....
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love it!!
Your poem cleverly captures the perplexing situation of such sadly mixed signals when one is left only with I wonder why????
Love it my dear...a scenario that seems so ordinary yet..like jena massie said: THE END IS JUST FABULOUSLY EARTHQUAKELY (?) TREMBLING....LOVE IT MY FRIEND..