As i sit here in this room alone waiting to see when God will deliver me from here. Waiting to see what God wants for me and from me. I think of all i have been through and all i am still going to go through. Then i think what is ahead of me? Trying not to look behind at all that I have got through. All i have to say is Lord thank you.
You are a bit of an enigma Adjhe, like you have said yourself, you write quite like a very young person - your writing is done in a simple way, but your themes are not young and don't tell the reader that you have not lived. They are in fact very complicated and thought provoking like this poem. It's easy to look to the future when you can see joys and accomplishments ahead, it's much harder when you can't see anything to look forward to. Cool write my friend.
Ladybee thank you for the seetness and truth you have about you. Thank you for the encouraging words.
bungallow55Lakeland, Florida USAAug 19, 2012
LadyBee there's so much to see when we look to the sky. I've been telling this to people for so many times but they took it as a joke.I'm glad you write this poem,this proved I've been right all this time.
bungallow55Lakeland, Florida USAAug 19, 2012
Oops! my mistake...sorry for that.Adjhe.
bungallow55Lakeland, Florida USAAug 19, 2012
adjhe I credited your poem to Ladybee,she made the correction sorry.
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It's easy to look to the future when you can see joys and accomplishments ahead, it's much harder when you can't see anything to look forward to. Cool write my friend.
I've been telling this to people for so many times but they took it as a joke.I'm glad you write this poem,this proved I've been
right all this time.
sorry.