Have you ever felt so misunderstood? Your complexity shrouds all your good. Something that you can't comprehend, So you quietly shed tears of frustration. You cast yourself aside, hide behind your Anguished pride. Made some mistakes in the past, ended by love That didn't last. There's people all around you, but they just Can't understand you. A loner you have become, uncertain and always On the run. Don't relish in there silly ways, you have Something they need. The sweetest sound is not unsaid, Hold up your weary head. So much hatred in these times, No matter how you try, it isn't right. Don't suffer in silence, set your mind at ease. Don't beat yourself down, just to please. There will always be critics, plaguing your thoughts. Release your ability, that is meant to be taught. Just always remember, to be Who you are.....
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoDec 9, 2012
Poignant write Cherry.......
Have you ever felt so misunderstood? Your complexity shrouds all your good. Something that you can't comprehend, So you quietly shed tears of frustration. You cast yourself aside, hide behind your Anguished pride. Made some mistakes in the past, ended by love That didn't last. There's people all around you, but they just Can't understand you. A loner you have become, uncertain and always On the run. Don't relish in there silly ways, you have Something they need. The sweetest sound is not unsaid, Hold up your weary head. So much hatred in these times, No matter how you try, it isn't right. Don't suffer in silence, set your mind at ease. Don't beat yourself down, just to please. There will always be critics, plaguing your thoughts. Release your ability, that is meant to be taught. Just always remember, to be Who you are.....
I get the idea at the beginning that you have made the leap from being in life's drama - to being an observer of it - 'to be who you are' is all there really is that's important.
Hi, cherryreggae, There will always be critics, plaguing your thoughts (though, often we are our own worst critic). It is good to always remember, to be Who you are..... and give credit where credit is due. Thanks for sharing Who you are with us.
Hi Cherry was reading through your poetry and came across, Who you are...very true poem... and I like the Title very much... Its amazing how your words relate to how I have truly felt at times...nice one...
Hi rapture, Thanks for reading this poem, and connecting to it. I have felt this way to, at different times, in life & just wanted to express, it in a poem. Your comments are genuine & sincere!!! to me , thankyou
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Have you ever felt so misunderstood?
Your complexity shrouds all your good.
Something that you can't comprehend,
So you quietly shed tears of frustration.
You cast yourself aside, hide behind your
Anguished pride.
Made some mistakes in the past, ended by love
That didn't last.
There's people all around you, but they just
Can't understand you.
A loner you have become, uncertain and always
On the run.
Don't relish in there silly ways, you have
Something they need.
The sweetest sound is not unsaid,
Hold up your weary head.
So much hatred in these times,
No matter how you try, it isn't right.
Don't suffer in silence, set your mind at ease.
Don't beat yourself down, just to please.
There will always be critics, plaguing your thoughts.
Release your ability, that is meant to be taught.
Just always remember, to be
Who you are.....
Enjoyed your inspiring poem,well said
your fly,
which is happening in my eyes,
amazing loved it , well described outlook.
Charlie
There will always be critics, plaguing your thoughts (though, often we are our own worst critic). It is good to always remember, to be Who you are..... and give credit where credit is due. Thanks for sharing Who you are with us.
Thanks for reading this poem, and connecting to it. I have felt this way to, at different times, in life & just wanted to express, it in a poem. Your comments are genuine & sincere!!! to me , thankyou