Thanks for your time...

Thanks for your time.

It was so Devine.
Just to enjoy your company
Although, things would
Never be...
I will remember you,
In hopes you, remember me.
Things sometimes,
We just can't see...

Thanks for your time.
I live with this rhyme
That echoes in my head,
When we shared each
Others bed...

The love we made, was the
Memory I saved...
That was a wonderous
Storm, which ended in its calm.

Thanks for your time.
It was worth, all the signs.
Of a sad goodbye
when a hearts first hello, lies..

Simply no regrets,
As I can reflect.
In that special place in time.
That was made, just to be
Mine...

Thanks for your time...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2013

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Comments (24)

Skymore
"Thanks for your time ! " I sadly agree with you ...
sad flower

Thanks for sharing , Cherry !teddybear
vyoleta
It is a great thing that you can feel like this although it ended, as far as I can see, in a not very pleasant way for you. Beautiful feeling and a beautiful poem, too. Best wishes.handshake
Poetnumber1
So does this mean i can bring my homemade icecream without sneeking through the bushesrolling on the floor laughing help Seriously though Cherry,this is a beautiful.A bit melancholy but i love it!My regards friendhug
Poetnumber1
beautiful write i meantdoh wink
rapturecapture
Hi Cherry looks like you have special memories of a someone who will always, be a reminder of those moments, when everything felt right...loved the poem wave
beautifulyou
It seems that parting with some degree of thanksgiving or gratitude is important on multiple levels, as did you cherry. Even if things don't work out, we can learn something about ourselves from all who come across our path, and hopefully they from us.

Ty for your lovely sharing rose
LadyMorgana60
Beautifully penned Cherry.. to hold a past memory in a beautiful place was time more than worth being spent ...
"Thanks for your time".. a pleasure to read. bouquet purple heart
Spartacus2012
just passing by and glad i stopped to give it a read..Thanks for the sharing...
cherryreggae
Many thanks lady m!!! Appreciate your lovely comment!!teddybear
cherryreggae
Hi Spartacus, glad u stopped by:) Thankyou....appreciate your comment!!!dancing grin handshake
Nellyfola
Hw romantic u compose this work,i like it kudos to u.
Bigdauda
Thanks for your time.
I live with this rhyme
That echoes in my head,
When i red..
I enjoyed your piece..teddybear
fjamesj9701
Enjoyed reading nicely penned and thank you for your time
cherryreggae
Hi nelly.....thanks so .much 4 ur lovely comment appreciate ithug handshake cheers
cherryreggae
Hi dauda, glad you enjoyed it Ty4 comment....handshake thumbs up hug
cherryreggae
Hi.fjames thanks for your comment,. Always appreciate it from you!!peace handshake hug cool
morgen90210
Yo! Cherrybunny ...come and take a hug ...this is so enduring and beyond a normal poem ... Truly awespiring piece ..
SUMMIT09
I LOVED IT, NO REGRETS, AS I CAN REFLECT. HMMMM REMINDS ME OF A LOVE THAT WAS.confused crying love
cherryreggae
Thankyou so much for your kind & generous words mogen!!!...appreciate you so much, hug heart1 heart wings bouquet
cherryreggae
Thanks summit , for your lovely comment!!!bouquet grin :)
Yankee4you
Like love that's always saying 'goodbye'....will always die a premature life or lie......cool cool cool
cherryreggae
Very wise words Yankee......thankyou!!! 4 your comment so true.... handshake thumbs up cool
ichliebedu
i still remember When was the last time
i have cried4U...you have given me
it was TIME

cherry...NiceOneOnceAgain...and the windows says
Continuing to load...
wait please
heehee
MyThanksToYou
cherryreggae
Thanks ichliebedu, I always appreciate your kind & understanding comments...one heart beating always....bouquet
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