It was so Devine. Just to enjoy your company Although, things would Never be... I will remember you, In hopes you, remember me. Things sometimes, We just can't see...
Thanks for your time. I live with this rhyme That echoes in my head, When we shared each Others bed...
The love we made, was the Memory I saved... That was a wonderous Storm, which ended in its calm.
Thanks for your time. It was worth, all the signs. Of a sad goodbye when a hearts first hello, lies..
Simply no regrets, As I can reflect. In that special place in time. That was made, just to be Mine...
"Thanks for your time ! " I sadly agree with you ...
Thanks for sharing , Cherry !
vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaFeb 2, 2013
It is a great thing that you can feel like this although it ended, as far as I can see, in a not very pleasant way for you. Beautiful feeling and a beautiful poem, too. Best wishes.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 2, 2013
So does this mean i can bring my homemade icecream without sneeking through the bushes Seriously though Cherry,this is a beautiful.A bit melancholy but i love it!My regards friend
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 2, 2013
beautiful write i meant
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 2, 2013
Hi Cherry looks like you have special memories of a someone who will always, be a reminder of those moments, when everything felt right...loved the poem
beautifulyouNew York, USAFeb 2, 2013
It seems that parting with some degree of thanksgiving or gratitude is important on multiple levels, as did you cherry. Even if things don't work out, we can learn something about ourselves from all who come across our path, and hopefully they from us.
Ty for your lovely sharing
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKFeb 2, 2013
Beautifully penned Cherry.. to hold a past memory in a beautiful place was time more than worth being spent ... "Thanks for your time".. a pleasure to read.
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Thanks for sharing , Cherry !
Ty for your lovely sharing
"Thanks for your time".. a pleasure to read.
I live with this rhyme
That echoes in my head,
When i red..
I enjoyed your piece..
i have cried4U...you have given me
it was TIME
cherry...NiceOneOnceAgain...and the windows says
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wait please
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