Into Forever (Shadows Challenge)

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Will you walk with me into forever
Holding my hands without time
We'll ride Halley's comet to the dark side of the moon
where you don't need air to feel alive

We can fly without wings over the Earth
Showering the planets with joy
Skipping from one star to the next
Until we reach the one I remembered as a young boy

It was the first one I saw when I was a child
The one shining so bright in the sky
And I made a wish as simple as this
I wished that I would be here with you in Heaven tonight

Will you come join me at the table
Of the universe sipping silver moon light
There is a trap door in the sun a quiet place just for us
Where our passion ignites fires to bring worlds to life

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Posted: Mar 2013

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Comments (44)

Bajanshay
Beautiful! Can I join you Jesse? angel
fjamesj9701
Thank you Bajanshay, and of corse you can, but forever is a long timewine....Jesse
darkhorse555
truly lovely jessewine transport used the spaceship to get around ha
Poetnumber1
Now I'm really fascinated by this well constructed piece Jesse.


Come join me at the table
Of the universe sipping silver moon light
There is a trap door in the sun a quiet place just for us
Where our passion ignites fires to bring worlds to life


Romantic and passionate my friend.I will take note of this once more

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beautifulyou
This is really cool Jesse,
I like it a lot!
The phraseology and imagery are great purple heart
fjamesj9701
Thank you DarkHorse I appreciate your comment....Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr MMPN1, but i de l this melodic me is coming to a temporary pause for the wretched darkness is coming.: laugh ...jesse
fjamesj9701
Thank you Beautiful,its always a pleasure to be graced by you...Jessewine
shadow1950
stunning Jessie and the photos too. If this is not both visionary and illusion I don't know what is lol please add it to my challenge
smmerwind
Come join me at the table
Of the universe sipping silver moon light
There is a trap door in the sun a quiet place just for us
Where our passion ignites fires to bring worlds to life

Don't get scorched my dearest Jesse,

But boy I just posted a burning flame of longing

This is so passionate my friend.

phyllis
Spartacus2012
I like the celestial references my friend.....Kenthumbs up beer
fjamesj9701
Thank you Shadow i really appreciate your Encouraging comment... Jesse wine
fjamesj9701
Thank you Phyllis , i already have been scorched , but oh well...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you Ken its Always nice to know you stopped by. Thank you handshake ...Jesse
niah9
Oh Jesse...what a change....passion drips from every word....instead of doom and gloom......I see the floating butterfly....applause I hope you have your eyes on a huge star..... for your harem....rolling on the floor laughing teddybear Kathy
rapturecapture
Hi fjames

I really loved reading your stunning poem.

There is a trap door in the sun a quite place just for us

I just love that line

Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughtswave
fjamesj9701
Thank you Kathy you are so kindteddybear but doom and gloom is making a come backgrin ...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Hi Rapture thank you very much for reading and leaving a comment. I truly appreciate it...Jessehug
shadow1950
Ty Jessie for entering your beautiful poem its a great example of illusion
Both bill and I are judging the poetry section and will announce the winner of it on fridayteddybear bouquet hug wine
Poetnumber1
Just don't let the darkness theif your hersheyslaugh doh
muhammadali91
This was really awesome...........................
fjamesj9701
Anytime Shadow, thank you for having me...Jessefrog
fjamesj9701
Thank you Muhammadall, i appreciate you stopping by to read and comment...Jessehandshake
Odette67
Come join me at the table
Of the universe sipping silver moon light
There is a trap door in the sun a quiet place just for us
Where our passion ignites fires to bring worlds to life

Wonderful imagination fjames... Love it. hug purple heart
fjamesj9701
Mr MMPN1, no never laugh I give my darkness hell...Jessebeer
fjamesj9701
Thank you C, I enjoy getting a positive review from you. It is surely encouraging. Thank you...Jessewine
LadyMorgana60
Your first stanza brings us into your journey so wonderfully!

Will you walk with me into forever
Holding my hands without time
We'll ride Halley's comet to the dark side of the moon
where you don't need air to feel alive


How can we not fail by wishing to join you :) Fab writing Jesse! hug gift purple heart
trurorob
Great stuff Jesse, keep em coming!!
Rob
fjamesj9701
Thank you very much LadyMorgana, I am always pleased to see your presence on the board...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Rob it truly is always a delight to see you my friend...Jessehandshake
paloma66
Superb Jesse! can Scher and myself join you at your table.purple heart
cherryreggae
Jesse...please take me there!!!angel applause
Love it!!!! Spectacular write....ty4sharinghug hug
Poetnumber1
Congrats on being the winner of the challenge Jesse.A well deserved win.handshake cheers
fjamesj9701
Thank you Paloma i appreciate the comment very much...jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you Marlkla for reading and your kind and encouraging comment. Brings a smile to me...jessehug
fjamesj9701
Thank you Cherry for reading. Its always my pleasure to hear from you...jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr MMPN1 , i wasnt expecting a win but cool...jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you everyone.Shadow for creating the contest, Bill for mediating, and everyone for all of your kind and encouraging comments and thoughts. So do i get a new car 20,000$ laugh
jonE2tone
Very imaginative , Thank You for sharing. Regards
fjamesj9701
Im a bit late but thank you 2Tones...Jesse
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