The Rain reminds me

As I lie in bed listening to the rain
Falling softly
The raindrops beating a soft melody
like a drum on the rooftop
The curtains fluttering in the breeze
Softly thru the open window

My arms instinctively
reach for you
And I find only a cold and empty space
Where you used to be

As the rain and the wind increased their symphony
Bringing it to a crashing crescendo

I snuggle deeper under my blankets
You
are no longer there
To wrap your warm arms around me
Or to whisper sweet nothings in my ear
The rain reminds me
that you are gone
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2013

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fjamesj9701
A wonderful piece, let the rain. Wash old thing and bring life to new...Jessewine
Bajanshay
Thank you Jesse. Glad you enjoyed it!
LadyMorgana60
Hi Bajanshay
Enjoyed your write..rain can be so cleansing..soothing our past pains.
Thanks for sharing..gift purple heart
trurorob
Yeah depicts lonliness in a good way, nothing worse than a cold side of the bed.
Rob
elo69
nice write....elo..wave
Bajanshay
Thank you Rob.I totally agree nothing worse! I keep a teddybear next to me when it is cold out. LOL teddybear
Bajanshay
Ladymorgana thank you I do agree it is cleansing. Thanks for your encouraging comments.
Bajanshay
Thank you eloquent!
Bajanshay
My autocorrect changed your name Elolaugh !
gnj4u
Hi, Bajanshay,
My arms instinctively reach for you... old habits certainly are hard to break, especially those involving warm arms and sweet nothings in one's ear. One is left with a hope for either sunshine or the rain and the wind learning to play a new tune. Thanks for sharing.
Bajanshay
Gnj4u yes old habits do die hard. Thank you for your comment.
Poetnumber1
A refreshing write in its entirety mingled with a sense of sadness.I loved your poem for it reminded me of just the opposite emotion when rain falls.handshake
rapturecapture
Hi Bajanshay

I loved reading your poem

The Rain reminds me

After reading I felt content
Amazing... Wow
Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughtshug wave
rapturecapture
P.S.

Clarify...

My thoughts before the morning rain reminded you
You had someone special in your bed,
Missing his departure...Im hoping his gone to work?
Again wonderful poem x
cherryreggae
The rain replimishes & renews....a lovely write, really enjoyed reading!!! Thankyou for sharing bajanshay...applause cheering applause
Yankee4you
Bajanshay..the soft rain tapping on the window conjours up so many deep feelings to make it rather exciting.....and also at the same time sad.....
Bajanshay
Rapture unfortunately he is no longer there ...relationship is over

Cherry thank you for your comments glad you enjoyed it!
Bajanshay
Yankie4u thank you for your comments.
shadow1950
a poem full of wanting time to stop even go back to earlier ones a poignant write Bajanteddybear bouquet hug wine
Bajanshay
Thank you Shadow,
I am glad you liked it!wine
natureman365
You have a very beautiful poem, it is well written!
paloma66
So tender the symphony of the falling rain evokes memories sweet memories for you how nice it sounds BS.bouquet hug
Bajanshay
Hi natureman,
Thank you for stopping by . Glad you enjoyed it.teddybear
Bajanshay
Hi Paloma,
Thank you for reading. I am happy you enjoyed it. teddybear
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