As I lie in bed listening to the rain Falling softly The raindrops beating a soft melody like a drum on the rooftop The curtains fluttering in the breeze Softly thru the open window
My arms instinctively reach for you And I find only a cold and empty space Where you used to be
As the rain and the wind increased their symphony Bringing it to a crashing crescendo
I snuggle deeper under my blankets You are no longer there To wrap your warm arms around me Or to whisper sweet nothings in my ear The rain reminds me that you are gone
Hi, Bajanshay, My arms instinctively reach for you... old habits certainly are hard to break, especially those involving warm arms and sweet nothings in one's ear. One is left with a hope for either sunshine or the rain and the wind learning to play a new tune. Thanks for sharing.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 3, 2013
Gnj4u yes old habits do die hard. Thank you for your comment.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 3, 2013
A refreshing write in its entirety mingled with a sense of sadness.I loved your poem for it reminded me of just the opposite emotion when rain falls.
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandApr 3, 2013
Hi Bajanshay
I loved reading your poem
The Rain reminds me
After reading I felt content Amazing... Wow Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandApr 3, 2013
P.S.
Clarify...
My thoughts before the morning rain reminded you You had someone special in your bed, Missing his departure...Im hoping his gone to work? Again wonderful poem x
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Enjoyed your write..rain can be so cleansing..soothing our past pains.
Thanks for sharing..
Rob
My arms instinctively reach for you... old habits certainly are hard to break, especially those involving warm arms and sweet nothings in one's ear. One is left with a hope for either sunshine or the rain and the wind learning to play a new tune. Thanks for sharing.
I loved reading your poem
The Rain reminds me
After reading I felt content
Amazing... Wow
Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts
Clarify...
My thoughts before the morning rain reminded you
You had someone special in your bed,
Missing his departure...Im hoping his gone to work?
Again wonderful poem x
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