by BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael, Barbados
Nov 2013 804 Views 15 comments
Goodbye to MDF
Yesterday suddenly you were taken
I recently spoke with you it seems
Now you are no longer here with us
And it feels like a horrible dream
How can someone be that cruel
So angry to the point
That he or she could take your life
While leaving ours in disjoint
It is still unbelievable that
I no longer will
hear Your voice or see your face
Now all from you is still
We have only now our memories
To recall your own sweet smile
We say to you in our own way
Adieu and good bye
Sb
I recently spoke with you it seems
Now you are no longer here with us
And it feels like a horrible dream
How can someone be that cruel
So angry to the point
That he or she could take your life
While leaving ours in disjoint
It is still unbelievable that
I no longer will
hear Your voice or see your face
Now all from you is still
We have only now our memories
To recall your own sweet smile
We say to you in our own way
Adieu and good bye
Sb
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2013
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Comments (15)
Yes it was. Thanks for stopping by!
Sharon
How can someone be that cruel So angry to the point... Unfortunately, destructive behavior can be found within human nature. Trying to understand and harness that condition has been the task of so many civilizations. In Sympathy, may the writing of Goodbye to MDF bring comfort in the face of such tragic loss.
Thanks for your kind comments!
Sharon
You capture the despair of your loss with great feeling and sensitivity, this is a most touching tribute to your friend.
Kindest regards
Bill
I'm truly sorry for loss (((Sb)))
Deepest blessing and peace, unto you
It is so lovely to see you. Thank you for your kind comments.
Sharon
Thank you so much for your kind comments and for stopping by!
Sharon
Your comments are deeply appreciated. Thank you for stopping by.
Sharon
Thank you for your lovely comments and for stopping by!
Sharon
Thank you for your kind comment,
Sharon
How kind of you: It's a pleasure to see you back on this poetry site. Notwithstanding the loss of your dear friend, I hope you are otherwise well.
Kindest regards
Bill
Thank you for your kind and encouraging comments. It is nice to be back . Thanks for stopping by!