So, so, good Shay! I'm proud of u. Not ez subject matter to tackle but I love your take on it. Awesome poem. Totally can relate, how courageous u r. For me no drugs, no liquor, this is my weakness, to resist the Seductress, but like u I must fight on! I will wait a while longer for Ms Right, Thank u.
CatfootAround here, Western Cape South AfricaApr 23, 2014
Hi Shay An arresting finish to part one. I love it and I agree with Candykid. You have a beautiful smile and I cannot help to wonder who you were thinking of when that pic was taken.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 26, 2014
Hi Liam, Thank you for your kind comment.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 26, 2014
C.K, Thank you for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Thank you for your compliment also.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 27, 2014
Hi ken, Thank you for reading. It wasn't intended to be romantic as it was a part 2 to a poem on mental illness. Guess I was a bit too cautious and I apologize for the misunderstanding.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 27, 2014
Hi Joseph, Thank you for your comment. It is a struggle for those who fight every day.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 27, 2014
Hi Mick, Thank you for reading and your kind comment.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 27, 2014
Shay An arresting finish to part one. I love it and I agree with Candykid. You have a beautiful smile and I cannot help to wonder who you were thinking of when that pic was taken.
Hi Cat, Thank you for your lovely comments. Thank you for your wonderful compliment. Now who do you think I was thinking of when that pic was taken?
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaApr 27, 2014
Sometimes those demons can shout
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 28, 2014
Great write Sharon. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 28, 2014
Hi Steve, Thank you for your kind comment and for stopping by and reading.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 4, 2014
Hi MM, Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.
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On a separate note Bajanshay. .....your smile just lights this corner up.
Ken
An arresting finish to part one. I love it and I agree with Candykid.
You have a beautiful smile and I cannot help to wonder who you were thinking of when that pic was taken.
Thank you for your kind comment.
Thank you for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Thank you for your compliment also.
Thank you for reading. It wasn't intended to be romantic as it was a part 2 to a poem on mental illness. Guess I was a bit too cautious and I apologize for the misunderstanding.
Thank you for your comment. It is a struggle for those who fight every day.
Thank you for reading and your kind comment.
An arresting finish to part one. I love it and I agree with Candykid.
You have a beautiful smile and I cannot help to wonder who you were thinking of when that pic was taken.
Hi Cat,
Thank you for your lovely comments.
Thank you for your wonderful compliment.
Now who do you think I was thinking of when that pic was taken?
Thank you for your kind comment and for stopping by and reading.
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.