You make me feel pretty

by BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael, Barbados

Apr 2014 757 Views 30 comments

You make me feel pretty

You came into my life
Awakening my soul
Showing me myself
Through your eyes

You see me pretty
Hmmm
I wish I could see me
As you see me
Because you make me feel pretty

I have blossomed in your love
And your admiration
Reminded of my feminine side
All was hidden until you came
And you made me feel pretty

I thank God for you every day
For you climbed the walls of my heart
And knocked them down

As I go through my life
always I remember how

You make me feel pretty

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Apr 2014

About this poem:

Dedicated to my love...who makes me feel pretty everyday

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Comments (30)

Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaApr 26, 2014

Hey Shay fantastic write! Made me smile! Be blessed Sis.

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 26, 2014

you are beautiful insisde as well as the outside LOVE LOVE THIS POEM

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAApr 26, 2014

Sensitive and touching..you should feel pretty!

Ken

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 26, 2014

Beautiful poem and you should already know that you are. Nicely done and he'd better make you feel pretty or else his fish will wear concrete fins =)…Jesse

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 27, 2014

sweet heart touching beautifully penned piece dear friend loved the vision you drew

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandApr 27, 2014

So happy for you Sharon !
Well penned.........Mick.

SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USAApr 27, 2014

Very nice, everyone one you should have someone that makes them feel good about themselves, kind of difficult to find that these days, Thanks for sharing!

SAS

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 27, 2014

Hi Joseph,
Thank you. Glad you liked it !

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 27, 2014

Laura,
Happy you liked it!

Thank you for reading.

CatfootAround here, Western Cape South AfricaApr 27, 2014

Hi Shay
How does one make an already beautiful person feel pretty?
A beautiful poem that leaves me with few words.

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 27, 2014

Hi Ken,
Thank you for your lovely comments.

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAApr 28, 2014

Your more than pretty....your beautiful inside and out.....your beautiful spirit shines through your beautiful words.

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 28, 2014

Hi Jesse,
Thank you my friend, your comments made me smile!

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 28, 2014

Touching heartfelt piece Sharon. Beautifully written...I believe you were pretty even before he met you. But now you are more than a flower.. : )

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 4, 2014

Hi Liam,
Thank you for your lovely comment.

itchywitchgalway, Galway IrelandMay 4, 2014

So sweet Banjay

but you shouldn't need love or anyone to remind you of what you are because you are.. pretty that is

But no matter, i know exactly what you mean

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 5, 2014

Hi Mick,
Thank you so happy you enjoyed it!

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 5, 2014

Hi Snow,
Thank you for stopping by and I am happy you enjoyed it. Yes it is nice to know someone sees you in such a light.

jonE2toneOrlando, Florida USAMay 5, 2014

You should already feel pretty

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 6, 2014

@cat,
I don't know how you do it but you do it every day.

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 6, 2014

C.K,
Thank you for the lovely compliment!

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 7, 2014

Hi MM,
Thank you for the lovely compliment my friend.

Happy you liked it.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 7, 2014

Hello pretty just in case someone forgot to tell you today

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 10, 2014

Hi Itchy,
Thank you for your encouraging and kind comments.

glad you understood it.

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 10, 2014

Hi Jon,
Thank you for your kind comment.

online today!

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 10, 2014

you are a stunning woman, and I am so glad you have found someone who sees it

BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMay 13, 2014

Hi Jesse,
Thank you my dear friend!

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAMay 14, 2014

Found someone? If he doesn't buy you a full bouquet, tell him to take a hike! ......lol.....just kidding...

loyalover4uunknown, California USAMay 20, 2014

I like how some people react to others scrawlings and mentle momentums as such and per say...tears and toads,kings,tax collectors & a shore to stand on after exile or a warm shoulder to lean upon on a cold wet gloomy day.