When it rains all day we pass the time Snuggling in bed as the raindrops fall The wind blowing outside
Sweet kisses you gently rain on my neck Then slowly sensuously down my back
I breathe in your scent Your essence intoxicating Enticing Causing my senses to explode In a rainbow of sensations
As day turns to dusk We slowly dance To the rhythm of our heartbeat shadows on the wall reveals our secret delight in the soft warm glow of candlelight
As we kiss softly Basking in the afterglow Of love Your hands find mine They intertwine Love amazing Our love divine
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 20, 2014
Hi Zeurich, Thank you for reading and your comment! Happy you enjoyed it!
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 21, 2014
@Bill, Thank you so much for your wonderful review. So happy you liked it! You have made my day! Sharon
Skyrim_PrincessTralee, Kerry IrelandApr 21, 2014
As day turns to dusk We slowly dance To the rhythm of our heartbeat shadows on the wall reveals our secret delight in the soft warm glow of candlelight
Wow, you have a beautiful way with words and It makes me look forward to finding someone to experience a connection like this again.
BajanshayOPBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 22, 2014
Hi Skyrim, Thank you for your beautiful comment and for reading my poem. Happy you liked it.
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Lovely romantic poem.
Mick.
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A lovely poem and it fills me with envy.
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Thank you so much for your nice comment! Happy you enjoyed it!
romantic detailed poem outstanding.
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Now I wonder why you would be envious as you were the inspiration for this poem.
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thank you for your wonderful comment.Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by.
Thank you for reading and your comment! Happy you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for your wonderful review. So happy you liked it! You have made my day!
Sharon
We slowly dance
To the rhythm of our heartbeat
shadows on the wall
reveals our secret delight
in the soft warm glow
of candlelight
Wow, you have a beautiful way with words and It makes me look forward to finding someone to experience a connection like this again.
Thank you for your beautiful comment and for reading my poem. Happy you liked it.
Ken
thanks for stopping by. Happy you liked it!
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by.
What a glowing poem in this little corner!
Almost taste like a minty chocolate...
thank you so much for your lovely words and the visit. So happy you enjoyed it.