Tired heart looking no more, Painful smile hanging over, Why the smile I longed to see would never be there, Missing the laugh we used to share.
Spring does in the air, and tears slowly disappear. What am I doing here? Wait for nothing but your embrace.
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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
I wrote this for someone that I met in CS but he might not ready for both of us though we were in love before. I can see that in his eyes, but he just didn't believe me. He kept telling me that I am too good to be true for him.
This is the first poem of yours I've read. You touch upon a delicate part of our human experience but also define what you are not willing to settle for...interesting point.
Dew. I request the person, To come back in your life.
ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaMay 3, 2013
Thanks for your support and comment Ed! It just came out this afternoon and voila! My first debut!
ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaMay 3, 2013
He is not worth it again,Non. But i stop looking. He will get what he deserved and it is obviously not my heart. He dont deserved it... Hope you had a nice day
ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaMay 3, 2013
Thank you Darkhorse
ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaMay 3, 2013
Thanks Yankee it is my first poem indeed. I was surprised myself i can write that
ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaMay 3, 2013
Ahhh Tim, i wish he never come back. Maybe it's better this way Have a lovely day!
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 3, 2013
Some interesting comments and good advice therein.However,your poem is nicely composed ChristinDew.Welcome to poets corner.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMay 27, 2013
its never too late to say hello Apa khabar? a lovely entry and heart breaking poem!
at least you have fans and well wishers stay and you'll find someone from what I can see it won't be long,trust me
ill see you around and a big welcome
ChristinDewOPToronto, Ontario CanadaMay 28, 2013
Dear Poet and Morgen, thank you and i hope i can give a valuable contribution for this corner
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 28, 2013
Comments (14)
Congratulations!
Cheers! I hope you write more!
I request the person,
To come back in your life.
It just came out this afternoon and voila! My first debut!
He will get what he deserved and it is obviously not my heart.
He dont deserved it...
Hope you had a nice day
I was surprised myself i can write that
Have a lovely day!
Apa khabar?
a lovely entry
and heart breaking poem!
at least you have fans and well wishers
stay and you'll find someone
from what I can see
it won't be long,trust me
ill see you around
and a big welcome