Shoulder to shoulder Army and Marines 21st century soldier lethal killing machines Were to take this strong hold and set nations free Starting with ridding this city from insurgent filled streets Gave civilians early warning tomorrow we'll invade Closing in to the center until our enemies are laid waste If you remained in the city then you're presumed to be a threat Honestly I've never felt so alive to see so much death Remove emotions, suppress fears, then move on to the bridge No mechanism support for this battle just our strong wills to live From house to house we kicked down every single door Fueled by adrenaline and hate from the first twenty-six days at war Prepared to engage in any hand to hand combat Enclosed battle zones allow for these kind of attacks Its a different feeling to pull a trigger and watch the bodies fall Then to fight human eye to human eye bare knuckled in a brawl Pulling blade from sheath then stabbing the threat seven times in his side Compassion is a but ghost when its his life or mine Three more times into the ribs until there was nothing left in his eyes The day I befriended fear and I brought my knife to a gun fight
Mr Cafe, I guess a purge every now and then is healthy, thank you very much I feel better about writing it. I thought it would get shunned I guess, but now I am glad I did. Thank you again...Jesse
Thank you Ivory, that is surely a comment that encourages one to write. I almost didn't post it for the obvious but sometimes I just need to lol. Thank you again my friend...jesse
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 27, 2013
Well crafted dark piece Skywalker, depicting war and the heartlessness that it entails. A pleasure to read as always my friend.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 28, 2013
the title is hilarious, but its darker inside, it does leave a bitter taste, one that i think and shudder, but than my fear is gone, coz i am reading your poem, so i am at peace with you
and you got me to rhyme. . . Jesse James and i love that profile. . matches you too
Thank you again Ivory , there are many of my haunting ghost like this I won't post. I've only posted three this being the third, combat was my first, then basketcase. I really appreciate your uplifting comment. Thank you again...Jesse:handshake:
Man bro...just wow...so real and pure...glad you made it back to write about it..and thank you from an American who appreciates what our armed forces have to do for our freedoms...mad love bro...keep the faith..
TorlessChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandNov 13, 2013
Impressively well written, and it creates a very real vivid picture. thanks for sharing
Thank you for reading Torless, I appreciate it very much. …Jesse
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 14, 2014
I cried when I read this Tears still streaming down my face I'm speechless Thank you from the bottom of my heart for serving our country may peace come to you my dear friend GOOD BLESS YOU JESSE!
Comments (41)
Cafe
Awesome write!!!!
I felt the realism in this, just wow!!1
u have me lost for words!
I do hope the scars heal
Don't be afraid to post your stuff bro, even if you think someone won't like it
This poem is worth
but its darker inside,
it does leave a bitter taste,
one that i think and shudder,
but than my fear is gone,
coz i am reading your poem,
so i am at peace with you
and you got me to rhyme. . . Jesse
James and i love that profile. . matches you too
thanks for sharing
I really loved reading your Awesome poem
Great Title....
Martina xxx