Always Bring A Knife To A Gun Fight

Shoulder to shoulder Army and Marines
21st century soldier lethal killing machines
Were to take this strong hold and set nations free
Starting with ridding this city from insurgent filled streets
Gave civilians early warning tomorrow we'll invade
Closing in to the center until our enemies are laid waste
If you remained in the city then you're presumed to be a threat
Honestly I've never felt so alive to see so much death
Remove emotions, suppress fears, then move on to the bridge
No mechanism support for this battle just our strong wills to live
From house to house we kicked down every single door
Fueled by adrenaline and hate from the first twenty-six days at war
Prepared to engage in any hand to hand combat
Enclosed battle zones allow for these kind of attacks
Its a different feeling to pull a trigger and watch the bodies fall
Then to fight human eye to human eye bare knuckled in a brawl
Pulling blade from sheath then stabbing the threat seven times in his side
Compassion is a but ghost when its his life or mine
Three more times into the ribs until there was nothing left in his eyes
The day I befriended fear and I brought my knife to a gun fight

Fallujah 11/9/04
3rd & 5th
~ JJF~
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Posted: Oct 2013

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cafetwo2010
This is stone cold awesome bro..and then some.
Cafe
diana_1
wow....wow
fjamesj9701
Mr Cafe, I guess a purge every now and then is healthy, thank you very much I feel better about writing it. I thought it would get shunned I guess, but now I am glad I did. Thank you again...Jessecheers handshake
fjamesj9701
Wow yourself Dianalaugh wow But I will still give thanks, so thank you for your time and wowzer. Always a pleasure...Jessewine
IvoryPetals
omg! this was epic!
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cheers

Awesome write!!!!

I felt the realism in this, just wow!!1

u have me lost for words!

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Redex
This is one hell of a poem, hell itself depicted. Now the battle is over.
I do hope the scars healhug
fjamesj9701
Thank you Ivory, that is surely a comment that encourages one to write. I almost didn't post it for the obvious but sometimes I just need to lol. Thank you again my friend...jessehandshake
Poetnumber1
Well crafted dark piece Skywalker, depicting war and the heartlessness that it entails. A pleasure to read as always my friend. cheers
darkhorse555
jesse excellent piece dear friend top shelf in my booksangel
fjamesj9701
Thank you Red, I always enjoy your presence and the scars fade, but still always a reminder. Thank you again...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you my friend, always good to see you...Skywalkerbeer
fjamesj9701
Thank you my friend LDH, well good then it can sit on the top shelf with all of your work. Glad to see you...Jessehandshake
Ravensgold
What a brilliant and graphic piece of writing...totally enjoyed this FJ...Amazinghandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you Raven I truly appreciate your time. Thank you again...Jessehandshake
jonE2tone
Fantastic write brothumbs up
IvoryPetals
honestly this is one of the best poems i ever read! i can't even begin to glorify this poem! Thank you for sharing this jesse! it was worth the read!

Don't be afraid to post your stuff bro, even if you think someone won't like it

This poem is worth


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fjamesj9701
Thank you 2Times very much...jessecheers
morgen90210
the title is hilarious,
but its darker inside,
it does leave a bitter taste,
one that i think and shudder,
but than my fear is gone,
coz i am reading your poem,
so i am at peace with you

and you got me to rhyme. . . Jesse
James and i love that profile. . matches you too
fjamesj9701
Thank you again Ivory , there are many of my haunting ghost like this I won't post. I've only posted three this being the third, combat was my first, then basketcase. I really appreciate your uplifting comment. Thank you again...Jesse:handshake:
fjamesj9701
Thank you Morgen, glad you enjoyed and that I could make you rhyme lol, thank you again friend...Jessebeer [/color]
madtat29
Man bro...just wow...so real and pure...glad you made it back to write about it..and thank you from an American who appreciates what our armed forces have to do for our freedoms...mad love bro...keep the faith..
Torless
Impressively well written, and it creates a very real vivid picture.
thanks for sharing
fjamesj9701
Thank you MT , I appreciate your time and thoughts and regards to you my friend. Thank you again…Jessehandshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you for reading Torless, I appreciate it very much. …Jessewine
Girlygirl196349
I cried when I read this Tears still streaming down my face I'm speechless hug hug Thank you from the bottom of my heart for serving our countryhug may peace come to you my dear friend GOOD BLESS YOU JESSE!teddybear teddybear angel angel angel gift balloons balloons thanks
fjamesj9701
A little late but thank you my dear Miss LGG and I apologize for the tears just seems the more I get it out the better it is. Thank you again…Jessewine teddybear
Girlygirl196349
I'm sure !, you rock Jesse!!teddybear
jonE2tone
Just read this again as its back on the front page and it hits a nerve just as it did beforethumbs up
fjamesj9701
Just because I rock doesn't mean Im made of stonewink Me Myself & Irenegrin
fjamesj9701
Thank u Mr 2Tones I appreciate your time good sir…Jesse
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jonE2tone
Anytime FJ I appreciate ur poemsthumbs up
fjamesj9701
Cheers 2Tones thank you much
Turbotim1961
What an awesome poem. Scary times. Loved it, what talent you have.
fjamesj9701
Thank you ver much Turbotim for your times and thoughts. Much appreciated and I believe scary only scratches the surface. Regards …Jessehandshake
123whisper
Mr fjamesj;Awasame poem.I admire your great talent wine
fjamesj9701
Always late but your comment still means the same. Thank you much Miss Whisper… Jesse
Leony1510
WELL Said and respect for every soldier given there lives to stamp out icis
fjamesj9701
Thank you much 1510, I appreciate your time and thoughts . Cheershandshake
rapturecapture
Hi Jesse

I really loved reading your Awesome poem

Great Title....


Martina xxxhug teddybear bouquet
fjamesj9701
Always love seeing you around Martina and thank you for your time. Its always my pleasure.. Much love … Jessewine
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