Stuck in a world where truth has died darts of lies sting my insides They burn a hole so deep guts and gore spill to the floor I pick them up blood oozing between my fingers Hot and sticky I may die as I stare in horror Sinister voices try to lure me to convince me of truth coming through gritted slobbering teeth I feel their darts hit and slither covered in slime of another lie cradling my bloody contents looking through a hazy sludge trying to find an impregnable force while the lies turn into an apocalypse The darts rain from a once blue sky There is no safe place to hide If only truth were still alive
I must say not a bad debut, I like this very much...Jesse
EyeToLensToPageOPNorth Dinwiddie, Virginia USAOct 29, 2013
Thank you Jesse :0)
RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 29, 2013
This so very good I can only
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 29, 2013
Oh my so much gore but very graphic poem. 2nd one that makes my skin crawl so welcome and i hope a lighter less gory one .
EyeToLensToPageOPNorth Dinwiddie, Virginia USAOct 29, 2013
Thank you Redex :0)…Morgen, poetry is a way for me to release negative emotion so the positive can reside more freely inside. Sorry about your skin crawling, perhaps I will try something happy soon. Thank you for the welcome :0)
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but very graphic poem.
2nd one that makes my skin crawl
so welcome and i hope a lighter less gory one .