Your future hangs on a seamless lines of hopes to make up for the torrid love affair of morning and night of a dream that seems to dwell on all your sorrows on a life you wish you had up until now.
Your child that has yet to be born on a future of uncertainties you built your strength on their hopes that their years will count for generations unlike you.. it has to end right here among the shadows of torment and hopelessness in a foreign land where you haven't even have a clue on how they spell, write and say "i love you".
But you knew, as you were facing the front lines of whose sides you would stand on their truth or yours, like it makes a difference knowing it will be right... this war that divides whose supposed to have the truth of who's wrong and who is more deserving to be right, but...
Did you know? those whose lives, ransomed for freedom to make you a hero? felt the same sentiments and hopes? the same aspirations and ambitions? same pains and sorrows and like all of us, they, too, have a heart, have a soul that is pierced by the bullet of hatred we sustained believing that their death is our prize for freedom.
Is it?
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
For those involved in wars for the intention of world peace...My respect to all of you whose lives had been pawned for such cause..
and like all of us, they, too, have a heart, have a soul that is pierced by the bullet of hatred we sustained believing that their death is our prize for freedom.
Is it?
We are all one on this planet, only true love for our fellow man will bring an end to all wars. Thank you for sharing.
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 13, 2013
once a war has begun. Both sides have lost. Not only rationality but also the true spirit of Mankind. and those who do not give in to brutalities and inhumanity's, they are indeed the light and the way forward. True hero's indeed.
a great bit of writing sundayrose
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 21, 2013
ken my gentle friend,
thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 21, 2013
Sweet,
You truly got my direction. In fact I was thinking more of the lives of those that yet unborn as caused by the killing of our prime youths for losing their lives.
thanks so much for your visit and comment.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 21, 2013
You said it very well Nonsmoker and I am thankful for your read.
My appreciation for your contribution.
Thanks again.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USANov 27, 2013
I have just been reading the news in Afghanistan abd peace doesn't seem any closer to achieve. Maybe we should think of a good resolution to avoid more casualties. Then again maybe I'm wrong. Maybe truly war and killing is a part of this sick life and there's nothing we can do about it.
Comments (14)
they, too, have a heart,
have a soul that is pierced
by the bullet of hatred
we sustained believing
that their death is our
prize for freedom.
Is it?
We are all one on this planet, only true love for our fellow man will bring an end to all wars. Thank you for sharing.
Sundayrose
A deep and well thought out write from you..Your opinion is well received with the reader!
Regards,
Ken
deep and thought provoking -F
But we can truly fix it.
SR
SR
Not only rationality but also the true spirit of Mankind.
and those who do not give in to brutalities and inhumanity's,
they are indeed the light and the way forward. True hero's indeed.
a great bit of writing sundayrose
thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate.
SR
You truly got my direction. In fact I was thinking more of the lives of those that yet unborn as caused by the killing of our prime youths for losing their lives.
thanks so much for your visit and comment.
SR
My appreciation for your contribution.
Thanks again.
SR
Thank you all again for reading and commenting.
Respectfully
SR