waiting

by Unknown

Jan 2014 771 Views 24 comments

waiting

Author: Unknown

Strong yet scattered
Deep in silence, a rare moment
You in a daze of the horizon
Nothingness abound
Would've been that you feel?
Me looking? Around?
Yet
Heart is never subdued
As it knows not what it wants
Nor would it settle alone
With just one
Why for
There's of us, countless
By the thousands
Who'd hesitant nay
To climb aboard your wagon
Could've have held you tight
And bury you deep in my heart
But your free spirit unbound
Reaching the farthest star
Among the unknown
In a horizon
Where I can never belong

Still I will always love you
And waiting
Deep within my soul
Hoping
One day you will know
I have always been inside of you.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jan 2014

About this poem:

For my dreams are incessant

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Comments (24)

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAJan 28, 2014

SR,
SOoooooooooo Poignant, kind'a sad

I can relate to this man!...and I will tell you this SR, "He's a FOOL"!...and he will regret he did not "carpe diem"!!!

Beautifl and touching piece

Robert

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJan 28, 2014

dazzling deep and very beautifully penned excellently drawn ddream

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 28, 2014

powerful SR, 'Deep in silence, a rare moment
You in a daze of the horizon
Nothingness abound ..'
and, how you bring this home!
..love the last sentence

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 28, 2014

Thanks Tar

Sr.

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 28, 2014

Thanks Liam, as always. Love you both.

mimzy333unknown, Washington USAJan 28, 2014

my darling friend your sarrow is well warrented, but our minds and dreams have a way of falsafying the reality of our situations. I pray that someday the reality of this lost love sets in and the pain subsides.

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 29, 2014

Beautiful Yu, thanks as always

Love

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 29, 2014

Beautiful Yu, thanks as always

Love

SR

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaJan 29, 2014

Well beautiful Phyllis this is so lovely, it gives me a feeling of for everness, that is a word too by the way, I looked it up in MY dictionary, what a timeless beautifully written poem

Angie

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 29, 2014

Cameal my friend. Nice to see you back.

Love you and take care.

SR::bouquet:

online today!

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJan 29, 2014

my darling friend,
your soul is so deep and your heart so big it will be alright finding space for another kind of love.
you will always love him,but just as you love each child as much in a whole new way you will find one strong enough to let inside.
you are to much of a beautiful soul not to

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaJan 29, 2014

My dear friend many of us can relate to this...Reading through this I'm reminded I once was told..."it's good that you are feeling hurt because it shows you're heart is still capable of loving"... and you my friend have such a big heart and a loving soul."

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 29, 2014

Angela my dear friend. Thanks for your visit. Love you both

SR

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKJan 30, 2014

Truely sweet romantic words you wrte SR hits all the boxes for me xxxxx

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 30, 2014

Angela my dearest friend. What a lovely presence you have my dear. Love you both and keep up that smile for the both of you. It radiates, always upon us all..

Thanks

nonsmokerWaterford, IrelandJan 31, 2014

So deep,
Your use of words to show such captivating images about freedom of spirit, I love this dynamic, fantastic.