your hands and more

Your hands, betrothed
In my name
Strong and yet gentle
your eyes, mirrors to your soul
Is where I want to dwell
If you so desire
In your mind
A maze of hidden treasures
I can't resist
If you'd let me
That's where I'd live
And your heart
Will it be mine to call it sweet?
Forever?
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
Just a dream
I hope for you to share

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Spartacus2012
Sensual write Phyllis..

Kenrose
darkhorse555
very beautifully penned phyllis dear friend excellent dreamangel wine
TAR_734
sundayrose1, I'm in "LOVE (...with this poem)!angel heart beating
Sweet, soulfully passionate piece!heart wings wow smitten
Authentic, Romantic, & Dreamy!bouquet
Very Well Done!!!wine
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Mizzy4
Another beautifully written poem Phyllis.
A pleasure to read. Mick. hug wave
sundayrose1
NSwine wine Thanks.

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beautifulyou
a beautiful dwelling SR,
ty for giving this to us teddybear
mimzy333
i want to be there too...loved this my friend phyllis
Odette67
Your hands, betrothed
In my name
Strong and yet gentle


The hands of a man are a turn-on to me, they must not be small and thin or smaller than mine, it is the first thing I look at when I meet a man, depends on his hands if I would ever date him.laugh Love this poem SR. purple heart
JimEee
"Your eyes, mirrors to your soul"
Tis a waiting place, a forever dream awaiting to be fulfilled ...
You penned it well!
JimEee
sundayrose1
Raven its so nice for you to visit and Happy birthday.

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sundayrose1
Ken thanks
Take care my friend.

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sundayrose1
Liam thanks. Love you both.

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sundayrose1
Robert thank you very much.

SR
sundayrose1
NS my deep gratitude. Always.

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sundayrose1
Mick thanks as always

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sundayrose1
Beautiful You thankks always. SRteddybear
sundayrose1
CCameal my dear my pleasure to see you back.

SRteddybear
sundayrose1
Odette, it is always a pleasure to be visited by you and your contribution is always appreciated

Thanks alwsys

SR
cafetwo2010
A sweet dream to be sure..
sundayrose1
Jimy thanks for your visit
SR
sundayrose1
Wayne's thanks much

SR
Bogart_1960
Carnal, cerebral... and intense. wine
sundayrose1
Mike thank you always with your addition on my write.

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Serenity4two
This poem is so tender and romantic ...really lovely Phyllis
Well done you hug bouquet
Poetnumber1
You've given a most romantic read Phyllis. Beauty exudes through its entirety. Regards M.M
sundayrose1
Thanks Jim for your visit
SR
sundayrose1
Bogart. Thanks. My great appreciation
SR
Angel04
So very gentle to the touch, beautiful romantic poem, touches the heart so lovingly.
I love it Phyllis
Angie, hug hug heart beating heart beating angel
sundayrose1
Fiona my lovely dear friend. Strength when it is is most needed , remember friends are around. I am.

Thanks

SRteddybear
sundayrose1
M thanks. As always
SR
sundayrose1
My dear Angela,

What a great day you brought me with your presence. Love you both.

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sundayrose1
Bogart I'm sorry didn't mean to forget you.

Your opinions are intense. Thanks.

SR
sundayrose1
Fiona, my sweet friend. Praying as always for you and hopefully, it will be alright.

thanks my dear.

Phyllis
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sundayrose1
M thanks. My appreciation always

SR
enigma2
Sweet, passionate -lovely thumbs up bouquet lips
sundayrose1
M my dearest friend. Like the new picture first of all. I am so grateful and so thankful on all those inspiring comments you always pour on my writes and your verses that are so great, they too, inspire me and most if not all of us on this corner. My eternal thankfulness.

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sundayrose1
Yes my dearest Angela, it is so lovely to see you with that new picture

Thanks my friend. Love you both.

Phyllis
Bajanshay
beautifuly written SR. bouquet
sundayrose1
Enigma, your comments are always so appreciated ad thanks so much my friend.

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sundayrose1
My beautiful friend Shay, what an honor for your rare visit. Thank you and congratulations on your great love with Cat. My happiness for the both of you.

Take care my friend and don't worry too hard.
Phyllis addyteddybear
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