Your hands, betrothed In my name Strong and yet gentle your eyes, mirrors to your soul Is where I want to dwell If you so desire In your mind A maze of hidden treasures I can't resist If you'd let me That's where I'd live And your heart Will it be mine to call it sweet? Forever?
Another beautifully written poem Phyllis. A pleasure to read. Mick.
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 24, 2014
NS Thanks.
SR
beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 24, 2014
a beautiful dwelling SR, ty for giving this to us
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAJan 25, 2014
i want to be there too...loved this my friend phyllis
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJan 25, 2014
Your hands, betrothed In my name Strong and yet gentle
The hands of a man are a turn-on to me, they must not be small and thin or smaller than mine, it is the first thing I look at when I meet a man, depends on his hands if I would ever date him. Love this poem SR.
JimEeeNew Haven, Connecticut USAJan 25, 2014
"Your eyes, mirrors to your soul" Tis a waiting place, a forever dream awaiting to be fulfilled ... You penned it well! JimEee
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014
Raven its so nice for you to visit and Happy birthday.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014
Ken thanks Take care my friend.
Phyllis
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014
Liam thanks. Love you both.
Phyllis
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014
Robert thank you very much.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014
NS my deep gratitude. Always.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014
Mick thanks as always
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014
Beautiful You thankks always. SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014
CCameal my dear my pleasure to see you back.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014
Odette, it is always a pleasure to be visited by you and your contribution is always appreciated
Thanks alwsys
SR
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJan 26, 2014
A sweet dream to be sure..
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014
Jimy thanks for your visit SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014
Wayne's thanks much
SR
Bogart_1960Ask me !, Provence-Alpes-Cote d'Azur FranceJan 26, 2014
Carnal, cerebral... and intense.
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 27, 2014
Mike thank you always with your addition on my write.
SR
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandJan 27, 2014
This poem is so tender and romantic ...really lovely Phyllis Well done you
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 27, 2014
You've given a most romantic read Phyllis. Beauty exudes through its entirety. Regards M.M
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 28, 2014
Thanks Jim for your visit SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 28, 2014
Bogart. Thanks. My great appreciation SR
Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaJan 28, 2014
So very gentle to the touch, beautiful romantic poem, touches the heart so lovingly. I love it Phyllis Angie,
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 28, 2014
Fiona my lovely dear friend. Strength when it is is most needed , remember friends are around. I am.
Thanks
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 28, 2014
M thanks. As always SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 28, 2014
My dear Angela,
What a great day you brought me with your presence. Love you both.
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 29, 2014
Bogart I'm sorry didn't mean to forget you.
Your opinions are intense. Thanks.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 3, 2014
Fiona, my sweet friend. Praying as always for you and hopefully, it will be alright.
thanks my dear.
Phyllis
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 3, 2014
M thanks. My appreciation always
SR
enigma2Melbourne, Victoria AustraliaFeb 4, 2014
Sweet, passionate -lovely
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 4, 2014
M my dearest friend. Like the new picture first of all. I am so grateful and so thankful on all those inspiring comments you always pour on my writes and your verses that are so great, they too, inspire me and most if not all of us on this corner. My eternal thankfulness.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 4, 2014
Yes my dearest Angela, it is so lovely to see you with that new picture
Thanks my friend. Love you both.
Phyllis
BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosFeb 4, 2014
beautifuly written SR.
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 5, 2014
Enigma, your comments are always so appreciated ad thanks so much my friend.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 5, 2014
My beautiful friend Shay, what an honor for your rare visit. Thank you and congratulations on your great love with Cat. My happiness for the both of you.
Take care my friend and don't worry too hard. Phyllis addy
Comments (40)
Ken
Sweet, soulfully passionate piece!
Authentic, Romantic, & Dreamy!
Very Well Done!!!
Robert
A pleasure to read. Mick.
SR
ty for giving this to us
In my name
Strong and yet gentle
The hands of a man are a turn-on to me, they must not be small and thin or smaller than mine, it is the first thing I look at when I meet a man, depends on his hands if I would ever date him. Love this poem SR.
Tis a waiting place, a forever dream awaiting to be fulfilled ...
You penned it well!
JimEee
SR
Take care my friend.
Phyllis
Phyllis
SR
SR
SR
SR
Thanks alwsys
SR
SR
SR
SR
Well done you
SR
SR
I love it Phyllis
Angie,
Thanks
SR
SR
What a great day you brought me with your presence. Love you both.
Your opinions are intense. Thanks.
SR
thanks my dear.
Phyllis
SR
SR
Thanks my friend. Love you both.
Phyllis
SR
Take care my friend and don't worry too hard.
Phyllis addy