resonating explosives reflected on your rugged looks a jagged edged rock lacerating my wounds raw as nerve bleeding where it sealed among seasons of seeking woven in the dreams of lasses, sweet yet coy and of unknown and untested origins some dark, perhaps lightened up to suit your taste and maybe natural blonde? I have no chance you won't turn around and even if you do, I will never be worth your glance...
yet, allow me, your penetrating piercing looks, just mesmerizing even by the standards of the Irish Gods And..even all the other Gods combined! and I mean it from the deepest of my heart.
I hope you will ever come to realize.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
just contemplating, not for anyone, here or outside of cs
have had too much darkness in my writes lately perhaps this will lighten up a bit.. thanks all for your reads and comments
Great use of words on this one Sundayrose I enjoyed it.
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJan 18, 2014
good Write SR enjoyed
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 18, 2014
We all have those moments Phyllis. Enjoyed your emotive and heartfelt poem this evening my friend. Thanks for sharing.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJan 18, 2014
Superb! Very unique !
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 19, 2014
Addy my friend, thanks.
Phyllis
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 19, 2014
Thank you so much Mick, your sympathy is well noted. My appreciation..
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 19, 2014
Liam, dear friend of mine. Stay on top of the worlkd with your love Angela will you? Who knows I might be in love again. just kidding..
Phyllis
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 19, 2014
Nice Non
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJan 19, 2014
Hi Sundayrose
I like this a lot... a very seductive/passionate/sensual read
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 19, 2014
N I am wondering?
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 19, 2014
Raven thanks so much..Your blog just blew me away yet it can't ever get closer to the truth of all truths..Forgive and forget..scapegoat for our weakness...yet a bliss to take...maybe I am wrong.
Thanks as always..
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 20, 2014
Shadow my appreciation always Sr
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 20, 2014
M thanks as always SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 20, 2014
Jim thank you for your visit.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 21, 2014
Martina I am always happy to see you on my write. Thanks beautiful friend.,
Comments (19)
just a wonderful poem reflecting back at life friend. Nice my friend
Take care..........Mick.
Phyllis
SR
Phyllis
I like this a lot... a very seductive/passionate/sensual read
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
Thanks as always..
Sr
SR
SR
SR