jagged edged rock

resonating explosives
reflected on your rugged looks
a jagged edged rock
lacerating my wounds
raw as nerve bleeding
where it sealed among
seasons of seeking
woven in the dreams of
lasses, sweet yet coy
and of unknown
and untested origins
some dark, perhaps
lightened up
to suit your taste
and maybe natural blonde?
I have no chance
you won't turn around
and even if you do,
I will never be worth
your glance...

yet, allow me, your penetrating
piercing looks, just mesmerizing
even by the standards of the Irish Gods
And..even all the other Gods combined!
and I mean it
from the deepest of my heart.

I hope you will ever come to realize.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
just contemplating, not for anyone, here or outside of cs

have had too much darkness in my writes lately
perhaps this will lighten up a bit..
thanks all for your reads and comments

Truly, SR

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adjhe
phyllis
just a wonderful poem reflecting back at life friend. Nice my friend
Mizzy4
Another great poem Sundayrose.....to leave someone of your caliber.....they are the loser.
Take care..........Mick. thumbs up daisy
darkhorse555
very beautifully crafted deep excellently penned some people are blind god bless dear friend angel wine
nonsmoker
Nice. thumbs up
Ravensgold
Great use of words on this one Sundayrose wink I enjoyed it.

wine bouquet
shadow1950
good Write SR enjoyedhug wine kiss
Poetnumber1
We all have those moments Phyllis. Enjoyed your emotive and heartfelt poem this evening my friend. Thanks for sharing.hug
cafetwo2010
Superb! Very unique !
sundayrose1
Addy my friend, thanks.

Phyllisbouquet
sundayrose1
Thank you so much Mick, your sympathy is well noted. My appreciation..

SRbouquet
sundayrose1
Liam, dear friend of mine. Stay on top of the worlkd with your love Angela will you? Who knows I might be in love again. just kidding..

Phyllisbouquet bouquet gift gift
sundayrose1
Nice Nonwave
rapturecapture
Hi Sundayrose

I like this a lot... a very seductive/passionate/sensual read

Thank you for sharing


Martina xxxhug angel wave
sundayrose1
N I am wondering?wave
sundayrose1
Raven thanks so much..Your blog just blew me away yet it can't ever get closer to the truth of all truths..Forgive and forget..scapegoat for our weakness...yet a bliss to take...maybe I am wrong.

Thanks as always..bouquet
sundayrose1
Shadow my appreciation always
Srbouquet
sundayrose1
M thanks as always
SR
sundayrose1
Jim thank you for your visit.

SR
sundayrose1
Martina I am always happy to see you on my write. Thanks beautiful friend.,

SR
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