dreary unlit room

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Jan 2014 744 Views 30 comments

dreary unlit room

Author: Unknown

It's half past midnight
And I'm alone
In this dreary unlit room
Your words still hanging
On this empty and shadowed wall
Painted in Red and Orange
Our chosen symbol
Of what forever is
But that was before you knew
You're more for Black and Blue
As if to unmask your hidden pains
That crippled our hearts
Throwing all our hopes
Scattered in oblivion
And I'm still so all alone
Waiting
In this dreary unlit room.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jan 2014

About this poem:

Just a thought that never goes away..trapped are these sorrows and pains in the dark walls of my past...

Thanks all for your reads and contributions
SR

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Comments (30)

nonsmokerWaterford, IrelandJan 25, 2014

please have this

loulou77Vancouver, British Columbia CanadaJan 25, 2014

sunday
Did'nt know that you wrote poetry as well...very nice...

nonsmokerWaterford, IrelandJan 25, 2014

The sun will shine again, It always does.

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 25, 2014

'Your words still hanging
On this empty and shadowed wall
Painted in Brown and Orange
Our chosen symbol
Of what forever is..'

wow, intense sundayrose,
much love and warmth sent your way darlin'

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014

Thanks. Very nice NS

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJan 25, 2014

Hi Phyllis,
A very cathartic but well crafted write from you..Nicely done..

Ken

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014

Loulou it is so nice of you to find me here and visit of course. Welcome to our board...Now pen those beautiful ideas of your will you?

Looking forward my dear friend...How is the weather there up North?

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014

I would sure hope so Non...
thanks so much...you lift me up.

loulou77Vancouver, British Columbia CanadaJan 25, 2014

sunday
It has been a sunny but cold day...still wearing my winter coat and scarf!! I just told non...I might try to write something but not sure at the moment!

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014

Lou don't worry it will come.,I promise. I know it is just a matter of putting it all together really. Sometimes easier than in the blogging.

I am looking forward to it my dear friend. Chilly in Californian today.

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 25, 2014

Thanks Beautiful you, as usual your comments are so much valued by me and give so much inspiration and you, too, lift me up, always.

SR

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAJan 25, 2014

"You're more for Black and Blue..."
I'm sorry SR,

I such an experience can be traumatic,
and is never forgotten, but it is my hope
that you have healed...enough to continue to try.

Very heart-felt melancholia..."beautiful write!

Robert

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014

Thanks Ken as always

SR

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJan 26, 2014

deep i can relate beautifully penned phyllis dear friend i pray the sun leaves a smile on your face

RavensgoldPanchos Villas, Wexford IrelandJan 26, 2014

Fine piece Sundayrose,..We have all been in that dreary unlit room at some stage.

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJan 26, 2014

Hi Sunday

I do hope these brighten up the dreary unlit room

Thank you for sharing your wonderful heartfelt poem

Martinaxxx

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJan 26, 2014

And I'm still so all alone
Waiting
In this dreary unlit room.

The demons always visit us when we are alone in a dreary unlit room, the hours before dawn can weigh heavy when we are alone. Stay strong.

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014

Thanks Ken, as always.
SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014

Nice of you to visit Loulou. thanks my dearest dear friend.

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014

I'd sure hope so Non. My commitment never bends...

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 26, 2014

Tar, thanks much for your comment.

SR

steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaJan 26, 2014

Sometimes we get trapped with our sorrows and pains ... but then the sun eventually breaks through and brings joy and light

the link for my book at the present is here

https://www.createspace.com/4613673

will be available on Amazon in about a week

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 27, 2014

Cameal my dear friend. I hope all ois okay?

thanks and take care.

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 27, 2014

Thanks Steve. Looks so beautiful on the cover. I will go and check it out. Beautiful and captivating words.

Sorry about my mail. I did, block all other countries but one. Because of so much mails, I can't attend.

Phyllis

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 29, 2014

Thanks Raven

Sorry about the delay. I truly appreciate
SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 29, 2014

Liam thanks my friend

Phyllis t

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 29, 2014

Martina thank you so much for the flowers. I didn't mean to forget you. My great appreciation on those lovely flowers and your very kind words all the time.

Love SR

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainJan 29, 2014

Fine writing even if a little sad.
Rob

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 29, 2014

Odette, my dear poet, thanks always. You always nourish my soul in writing more with your inspiring comments. Thanks

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 30, 2014

rob thanks for your visit. It has been a while and your participation however long in between creates a very inspiring feeling to write more. So that when you get back, voila, you reinvigorate us again, at least for me.

Thanks Rob.

SR

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