love where there is none

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Feb 2014 689 Views 24 comments

love where there is none

Author: Unknown

Tossed upon the swells
Gasping
Risen from the torments
Bottom so dark
Of the roaring ocean
Buried no more
Riding upon the waves
Waiting
Heart wrecker you are
Ensnared upon a storm
Waiving
Calling upon
A
""LOVE""

WHERE THERE IS NONE!

Or have I missed it
And it is gone?
Pinned me in a pit
That can never be undone?

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Feb 2014

About this poem:

when our mind is searching for what our heart needs yet it is elusive..

Perhaps the mind should not meddle in the matters of the heart?

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darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandFeb 8, 2014

like a lone wolf howling into the moon face searching love is the light touching piece beautifully drawn god bless

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAFeb 8, 2014

Very moving and confessional Phyllis..Nicely expressed!

Ken

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 8, 2014

Hi Sundayrose

I know this feeling well...

What a "wonderful heart" you have...It will happen... and I hope and wish it very soon for you.

Thank you for sharing your Heartfelt thoughts

Martina xxx

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 9, 2014

Liam thanks as always

Phyllis

mimzy333unknown, Washington USAFeb 9, 2014

most preadators count on you to use your heart verses your brain, that way they can minlupate you and use you.

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAFeb 9, 2014

Perhaps not..I find the two conflict a lot..
excellent poetry Phyllis...

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 9, 2014

Ken thanks as always

Phyllis

beautifulyouNew York, USAFeb 9, 2014

oh SR, you are rising!

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAFeb 10, 2014

SR..."Emotions can never understand the logic of the mind"!
Poignant write...enjoed it much!

Sinclair

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 10, 2014

Martina my beautiful friend, your contributions always leave so much smile on my face
Thanks always

Phyllis

Tango40Canberra, ACT AustraliaFeb 11, 2014

What a great poen S.R

.
Its not for me to know but it sounded very honest.

.
I enjoy reading your poem"s and this one is very touching.
Thank you S.R

RedexNorthumberland, England UKFeb 11, 2014

I can see you riding high on the waves SR a new you and new poetry. Strong very strong

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 12, 2014

My friend, probably but I know I have wizened up? and or maybe not.
But tony of course has a different opinion of which I respect, too.

Take care my friend.

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 12, 2014

Agree with you hundred percent my dear Tony.

Thanks a lot. and Happy valentine's my dear brother.

Phyllis

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 12, 2014

Beautiful You, my dearest dearest friend for such a long time, thanks to you over and over again on all your contributions specially on my blogs.

My deep love and appreciation for you and Happy Valentine's
Sr

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 13, 2014

Thanks Robert. Always

SR

enigma2Melbourne, Victoria AustraliaFeb 14, 2014

Very deep emotional, beautiful

GamerPyroAgawam, Massachusetts USAFeb 14, 2014

very nice, made me a bit teary eyed

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 15, 2014

Patrick tganks so much. ch Your love to each other radiates and thanks

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 15, 2014

Patrick tganks so much. ch Your love to each other radiates and thanks

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 15, 2014

Red my dear friend, what a pleasure as always and thank you again and again.,

Love
SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 16, 2014

Enigma, my true and heartfelt feelings for all your comments.

Thanks as always.

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 17, 2014

gamerpyei. welcome to my write. Thank you for. your comment

I truly appropriate

thanks

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 18, 2014

My mistake Gamerpyro, I am so sorry and thank you for your read.

SR

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