my hopes

by Unknown

Jan 2014 679 Views 22 comments

my hopes

Author: Unknown

brightened tomorrow
it lightened
the loads of my sorrow
at least for a while
yet seasons had passed
and as the falling rain
yet again washed my pains
and the seeds of hopes
planted in my heart
wilted in your forgetfulness.

Yet my hopes aren't really dead yet.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Jan 2014

About this poem:

just a thought. think of me once in a while, will you?

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Comments (22)

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAJan 17, 2014

Direct sorrow referenced, eased; with innuendo of another reoccurring, as deep recurring in perpetuity...whoa!...are you, by any chance related to EAP?...smile. Heart-felt & Dark!...just like I like it! Nicely scripted!

Just do me a favor and don't let the dark overwhelm your light, for I want to read more of your works for a loooooooong time to come!
Robert (Sinclair)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandJan 17, 2014

those seeds will blossom as love shines in your heart very beautifully penned god bless

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandJan 17, 2014

Hi Sundayrose, hope is a great thing to have so my hope for you is that those seeds will
constantly produce new green shoots of recovery. I love the poem. Mick.

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 17, 2014

Tar, who is EAP? Sorry with my lack of loop on that one. But thanks for your very heartfelt comments shared on my writes..

Sincerely.

SR

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaJan 17, 2014

You have taken notice of such beauty, I see you standing before a full ground of lush, vibrant colour and life, your heart moving, collecting as it goes, you have an energy Phyllis, it's good and it's strong use this

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAJan 17, 2014

Edgar Allen Poe...

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 17, 2014

First I apologize TAR, I am truly getting old, and to think that he's one of my favorite due to his dark poetry specially the Raven. together with Sylvia Plath..although Shakespeare is my best with Percy Bysshe Shelly, Lord Gordon Byron, John Keats. I am so use to be stating their full name.

Thanks Tar..

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJan 17, 2014

Hi Phyllis,
Thinking of you..

Ken

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 18, 2014

Liam thanks as always my dearest friend. And for the both of you and your beautiful love, it is so radiating bright...
Love you both.

SR

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKJan 18, 2014

The rain washes away the pain your heart grows stronger day by day till those seeds begin to blossenm xxx

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 19, 2014

Mick thank you so much and keep being strong. We are among the living. And that is good.,

Take care.

Phyllis

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 19, 2014

Angela my beloved friend, My delight to see you always and I love you both very much.,..

Take care..

minkybeebrisbane, Queensland AustraliaJan 19, 2014

This is beautiful and raw .. Thanks so much .. Hope is a trusting friend we all need to take care of xxx

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 20, 2014

Angela, thanks much. Love you both.

SR

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 20, 2014

Tar my appreciation..

SR:

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 20, 2014

Ken Thanks..

SR

benidormwellington, Wellington New ZealandJan 20, 2014

Thank you for sharing.
Rain brings life and new beginnings.

sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 20, 2014

Wayne it is so nice for you to visit. Thanks

SR

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 20, 2014

'..the seeds of hopes
planted in my heart
wilted in your forgetfulness....'

so poignantly expressed SR. ty for sharing your heart's experience with us. deep peace and blessings upon you