your rugged soulful face

Your rugged and soulful face
Captivated my broken heart
I see it in the wilderness
Among the pastures and the rocks
Yet for now meeting my eyes.

I decipher the silhouette
While sitting in the dark
Your thoughts I decoded
And your heartbeat I felt
As you were gazing at the stars.

Even after you hid it
So blank and I can't see
It left a potent mark
On my imagination
Darker, stronger than reality.

Goodbyes are sad and easy exit
Farewell I might expect
Yet hoping you won't forget
That rugged intriguing face
Will dwell forever in my heart.

Forever as forever is.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
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Redex
Another beautiful poem all be it sad. wonderfully writtenhug teddybear
Odette67
Hold your head high SundayRose
I know It hurts like hell to break those chains
Don't look back just walk away.
One day you'll be laughing through the falling rain
And find a deep and pure love again
That you deserve. hug purple heart rose
darkhorse555
deep touching very beautifully penned piece dear friend god blessangel tip hat
TAR_734
SR, I see a recurring theme in your many works...
I do not know who the guy is/was who left such an
impression on your heart, but I am sure, knowing you
for the short time I have, "He must have been a 'Most Mother F-er'!"...because I can only imagine you with a "Superman"!
Love this poem, as everheart wings
Robertbouquet
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Poetnumber1
This is very sadly portrayed but excellently crafted Phyllis. Its a beauty to peruse. Hugshug
beautifulyou
'And your heartbeat I felt
As you were gazing at the stars.

Even after you hid it..'


you describe such intimacy here sunday rose!
i have a glimpse into how this goodbye is so
intensely sad and yet... the forever dwelling.

ty for your purity of heart teddybear
sundayrose1
Thanks my dear old friend Red

SR
mimzy333
my darling friend I know your pain well as it is also my own. Moving forward is such a hard thing to do but it is something we must all do. Just rember the good and discard the bad,as those two timming jurks are not worth the tears.
trurorob
Now I read one yesterday of similar ilk and was about to comment but then you deleted it. You pour it out Kiddo if it helps, sometimes sadness can make great poetery as it has done here, repost the one from yesterday.
Rob
nonsmoker
very moving and very sad,
sad flower
Spartacus2012
Another good confessional Phyllis..

Kenrose
wayne34
Cast off your broken heart and let it wander with the stars lost in time the pain now forgotten a new chapter in life has begun very deep poem SR enjoyed reading your words teddybear
Ravensgold
Yet another fine piece of writing, from the heart S.R.Regards Anthonybouquet handshake
Mizzy4
I've said it before, but your comment almost belittles the poem.
Just a thought.........this poem is so much more than that.
Stunning ! is a better description. Mick.
kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss kiss
sundayrose1
Odette thanks so much as always. Your positive and strong belief that time will turn around for me is so encouraging. I am grateful as always.

thank you again.

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sundayrose1
Liam, couldn't ask for more from the both of you. Love you both.

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sundayrose1
Tar, I am so speechless..thanks

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Angel04
This is so beautiful Phyllis, intense in my mind, I love your words

Love and hugs warmly
Angiehug hug kiss kiss angel
sundayrose1
M my friend, thanks as always

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sundayrose1
Beautiful you, your soul is always a nourishing element on my write. Thank you so much my beautiful friend..

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rapturecapture
Hi Sundayrose

Forever as forever is.

This is a very loving... I really loved reading your wonderful poem

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug bouquet angel wave
sundayrose1
Cameal as usual my friend. Your support is always of high value with me. Love SRteddybear gift bouquet
sundayrose1
Rob yes what happened is I wasn't happy so I reedited it back to suit my feelings and glad I did.

Thanks. SRbouquet
sundayrose1
You read all to well NS

Thanks. wine
sundayrose1
Ken I truly appreciate

SRbouquet
sundayrose1
Wayne thanks. SR
sundayrose1
Anthony. My deep appreciation always for your visit

SRbouquet
sundayrose1
Mick my deep appreciation for your comment, always.

SRbouquet
adjhe
Phyllis
You need let your feelings out. It might be what someone needs at the time. You was a great inspiration to me when i started writing. Do not hold back leave it on the page as you walk away.
Pan is felt by many differently. Just love and heartache is.
God put you here for a reason so channel it.ADDY
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sundayrose1
Angela my beautiful friend. Love that fiery red. Thanks my friend. Love you both
SR
sundayrose1
Martina my dearest beautiful friend. What is laid out in my wound is healed by your soothing opinions. I love you my dear and thank you so much for being so perceptive and so loving on all my writings.

Take care.

Phyllis

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sundayrose1
My dearest Addy, you my friend, is making me so happy that all those soulful writes you have reflects pain, millions of magnitude more than mine. I am not worth to be read compared to yours, my dear. And for this I humbly kneel before you and please jopin the blog and share, it is very cathartic.. thank you so much.

Your friend for life,

Phyllisbouquet teddybear
sundayrose1
This may not always be the soul that inhabits of whom who has found me, yet in its highest form, I'd wish always its who is of whom I will be.

I love you and you know that.

SR
enigma2
Dear Sundarose1; all your poems are so deep and I truly enjoy to soak my wondering thoughts in each of them thumbs up "Forever" is a very long time ...wine
sundayrose1
Thanks my friend, and I am always grateful of all your comments and participation on my writes.

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sundayrose1
Today I just realized the depth of your soul emits the strength that nourishes my heart. thank yo again my dear firend Enigma.

I really appreciate all your comments onmy writes including my blog. You always put in so much truth in them.

thanks again and keep them coming.

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enigma2
SUNDAYROSE1;Thank you for kindness shown to me that is greatly appreciated by all means. What magnetically drowns me to you're beautiful spirit is so much depth and Love inside you without Ego. You are the kind of person so easy to love and admire wine teddybear
sundayrose1
Enigma my pleasure as always and thanks so much

Your friend

Phyllis
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