Another beautiful poem all be it sad. wonderfully written
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKJan 30, 2014
Hold your head high SundayRose I know It hurts like hell to break those chains Don't look back just walk away. One day you'll be laughing through the falling rain And find a deep and pure love again That you deserve.
SR, I see a recurring theme in your many works... I do not know who the guy is/was who left such an impression on your heart, but I am sure, knowing you for the short time I have, "He must have been a 'Most Mother F-er'!"...because I can only imagine you with a "Superman"! Love this poem, as ever Robert
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJan 30, 2014
This is very sadly portrayed but excellently crafted Phyllis. Its a beauty to peruse. Hugs
beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 30, 2014
'And your heartbeat I felt As you were gazing at the stars.
Even after you hid it..'
you describe such intimacy here sunday rose! i have a glimpse into how this goodbye is so intensely sad and yet... the forever dwelling.
ty for your purity of heart
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 30, 2014
Thanks my dear old friend Red
SR
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAJan 30, 2014
my darling friend I know your pain well as it is also my own. Moving forward is such a hard thing to do but it is something we must all do. Just rember the good and discard the bad,as those two timming jurks are not worth the tears.
Now I read one yesterday of similar ilk and was about to comment but then you deleted it. You pour it out Kiddo if it helps, sometimes sadness can make great poetery as it has done here, repost the one from yesterday. Rob
wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKJan 30, 2014
Cast off your broken heart and let it wander with the stars lost in time the pain now forgotten a new chapter in life has begun very deep poem SR enjoyed reading your words
I've said it before, but your comment almost belittles the poem. Just a thought.........this poem is so much more than that. Stunning ! is a better description. Mick.
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 31, 2014
Odette thanks so much as always. Your positive and strong belief that time will turn around for me is so encouraging. I am grateful as always.
thank you again.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 31, 2014
Liam, couldn't ask for more from the both of you. Love you both.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 31, 2014
Tar, I am so speechless..thanks
SR
Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaJan 31, 2014
This is so beautiful Phyllis, intense in my mind, I love your words
Love and hugs warmly Angie
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 31, 2014
M my friend, thanks as always
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 31, 2014
Beautiful you, your soul is always a nourishing element on my write. Thank you so much my beautiful friend..
SR
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJan 31, 2014
Hi Sundayrose
Forever as forever is.
This is a very loving... I really loved reading your wonderful poem
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 31, 2014
Cameal as usual my friend. Your support is always of high value with me. Love SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 31, 2014
Rob yes what happened is I wasn't happy so I reedited it back to suit my feelings and glad I did.
Thanks. SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 31, 2014
You read all to well NS
Thanks.
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAJan 31, 2014
Ken I truly appreciate
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 1, 2014
Wayne thanks. SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 1, 2014
Anthony. My deep appreciation always for your visit
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 1, 2014
Mick my deep appreciation for your comment, always.
Phyllis You need let your feelings out. It might be what someone needs at the time. You was a great inspiration to me when i started writing. Do not hold back leave it on the page as you walk away. Pan is felt by many differently. Just love and heartache is. God put you here for a reason so channel it.ADDY
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 2, 2014
Angela my beautiful friend. Love that fiery red. Thanks my friend. Love you both SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 2, 2014
Martina my dearest beautiful friend. What is laid out in my wound is healed by your soothing opinions. I love you my dear and thank you so much for being so perceptive and so loving on all my writings.
Take care.
Phyllis
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 2, 2014
My dearest Addy, you my friend, is making me so happy that all those soulful writes you have reflects pain, millions of magnitude more than mine. I am not worth to be read compared to yours, my dear. And for this I humbly kneel before you and please jopin the blog and share, it is very cathartic.. thank you so much.
Your friend for life,
Phyllis
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 2, 2014
This may not always be the soul that inhabits of whom who has found me, yet in its highest form, I'd wish always its who is of whom I will be.
I love you and you know that.
SR
enigma2Melbourne, Victoria AustraliaFeb 2, 2014
Dear Sundarose1; all your poems are so deep and I truly enjoy to soak my wondering thoughts in each of them "Forever" is a very long time ...
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 3, 2014
Thanks my friend, and I am always grateful of all your comments and participation on my writes.
SR
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 4, 2014
Today I just realized the depth of your soul emits the strength that nourishes my heart. thank yo again my dear firend Enigma.
I really appreciate all your comments onmy writes including my blog. You always put in so much truth in them.
thanks again and keep them coming.
SR
enigma2Melbourne, Victoria AustraliaFeb 4, 2014
SUNDAYROSE1;Thank you for kindness shown to me that is greatly appreciated by all means. What magnetically drowns me to you're beautiful spirit is so much depth and Love inside you without Ego. You are the kind of person so easy to love and admire
sundayrose1OPsan francisco, California USAFeb 5, 2014
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I know It hurts like hell to break those chains
Don't look back just walk away.
One day you'll be laughing through the falling rain
And find a deep and pure love again
That you deserve.
I do not know who the guy is/was who left such an
impression on your heart, but I am sure, knowing you
for the short time I have, "He must have been a 'Most Mother F-er'!"...because I can only imagine you with a "Superman"!
Love this poem, as ever
Robert
As you were gazing at the stars.
Even after you hid it..'
you describe such intimacy here sunday rose!
i have a glimpse into how this goodbye is so
intensely sad and yet... the forever dwelling.
ty for your purity of heart
SR
Rob
Ken
Just a thought.........this poem is so much more than that.
Stunning ! is a better description. Mick.
thank you again.
SR
SR
SR
Love and hugs warmly
Angie
SR
SR
Forever as forever is.
This is a very loving... I really loved reading your wonderful poem
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxx
Thanks. SR
Thanks.
SR
SR
SR
You need let your feelings out. It might be what someone needs at the time. You was a great inspiration to me when i started writing. Do not hold back leave it on the page as you walk away.
Pan is felt by many differently. Just love and heartache is.
God put you here for a reason so channel it.ADDY
SR
Take care.
Phyllis
Your friend for life,
Phyllis
I love you and you know that.
SR
SR
I really appreciate all your comments onmy writes including my blog. You always put in so much truth in them.
thanks again and keep them coming.
SR
Your friend
Phyllis