reflections

I may not contain
the realms of your reflection
neither would you give me
the honor to be owned
and yet in your mind
I want to belong
and in its brilliance
get drowned
many a thousand times.

with your strong hands
you already fathomed
the bottom of my heart
and mapped my soul
with your piercing
and penetrating eyes
and
I am well aware, the world
is your playground.

you are nobody's fool
succinct and straight to the points
your exuberance
intoxicating at times
extends here and beyond
like a raging bull
stomping the ground
I stand on.

I know and I understand
when it comes to substance
my heart and my mind
dry like the arid sand
but you made me feel crowned
just by wanting to know
that I made it home
safe and sound.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
Dream. The power of the mind.

Thank you all for your reads and valued comments.

SR

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darkhorse555
extremely beautifully penned reflection phyllis dear friendangel wine
rapturecapture
Hi Sundayrosebowing

I can only say I feel such warmth and depth in this amazing poem..Love with no bounds...just a stunning read...It has a very soothing effect on what lies within a private thought...

Thank you for sharing

Lots of love

Martina xxxhug bouquet thumbs up angel wave
cafetwo2010
A magnificent piece of work masterfully penned to
the last letter.
Spartacus2012
Hi Phyllis,
Some warm and sensual thoughts expressed here..

Kenflower
Serenity4two
Beautiful "reflections " Phyllis
A lovely read indeed my friend -F hug bouquet
Mizzy4
Hi Phyllis, it amuses me how you can write a brilliant piece
like Reflections and then in your comment you almost
treat the poem as if it were worthless.
This is a Fantastic write so take a bow !
Regards.....Mick. gift gift gift wine
sundayrose1
Liam thanks.

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sundayrose1
Martina, thanks.

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sundayrose1
Jim thanks.

SR:
sundayrose1
Ken thanks

SR
TAR_734
Just the "idea" of being found significant in another's mind and heart...makes all the difference. crying
I do not know if it is me, today, because I am feeling kind'a down, but this poem brings to my mind how lonely I am, and how wonderful it would be to be thought lovingly of another.
Beautifully poignant!...Excellent work SR! heart wings wine
Robert
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sundayrose1
Fiona my dearest friend. How is your dad? Praying and I am sure he will get better.

Take care dear friend.bouquet gift teddybear
sundayrose1
Tar thanks for your visit and comment.

SR
sundayrose1
Mike I am so sorry. Didn't mean to miss you and neither did I want to ignore your rather unusual comment. But just the same I totally understand. You are right, it is a product of a deep thinking I guess.

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steve1223
I love your "reflections"

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sundayrose1
Tar your reading and sharing is appreciated

Thanks
SR
sundayrose1
Steve thanks

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madtat29
Very deep reflections here Phyllis...Good stuff girl wine
sundayrose1
Tony nice to see you

Phyllis
mimzy333
buautyful and sad all in the same. my friend I know how you are feeling
sundayrose1
My dear mimzy. Cameal best good friend of mine. Didn't read you until now
Thanks my friend. SR
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