Girls Are Pearls That Make My World Swirl

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

Apr 2014 696 Views 12 comments

Girls Are The Pearls That Make My World Swirl

Some great kings are born into position,
Adorned with diamonds and pearls recommissioned...
All kings fall into sweet submission,
None can resist your temptation...

Queen of kings reigning you remain supreme,
Insisting pure perfection true consistor of themes...
Impeccable pearls,
Ruler of worlds,
Goddess of the girls that make my world swirl....

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Posted: Apr 2014

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Comments (12)

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAApr 5, 2014

Cool poem

I like it a lot

PeneloperosejaeIpswich, Queensland AustraliaApr 5, 2014

Made me smile

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 6, 2014

loved how you drew this the imaginary beautifully penned excellent piece

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 6, 2014

Hi girlygirl.nice to see you again, thanks for the comment.
Penelope thank you.
darkhorse my well penned friend thanks again.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 6, 2014

Your poem always have a musical feel to it Candykid. This one is just as I would expect. Lovely write.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 6, 2014

Thank you number one. I know what you mean....music has been so influential to me.

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaApr 6, 2014

lovely write sweet man

as a woman it made me feel good

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKApr 6, 2014

Hi CK, Liked the piece my friend. It flowed throughout, all It needs Is the music and you are off. This Is a well painted canvas. It does set the imagine going. A seamless run from start to finish. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.