Spring Time

by candykidAshburn, Virginia, USA

May 2014 1,214 Views 25 comments

Spring Time

The Spring brings things which the Winter witch stole...
Flowers soon bloom, bright colors unfold...
Trees resist breeze, and bring forth their fruit...
For your lovely lips to partake of...

The sounds of your heart are so doubly-sweet...
Natures heartbeat timed in constant repeat...
Recalling the days when you were so near...
Rhythmically wanting you here....

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: May 2014

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Comments (25)

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAMay 1, 2014

An uplifting write!

Ken

SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USAMay 1, 2014

Great job, loved the last line esp.

~SAS

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 1, 2014

The sounds of your heart are so doubly sweet...
Natures heartbeat timed in constant repeat...
Recalling the days when you were so near...
Rhythmically wanting you here....

O how I love Spring, when love is in the air. Beautiful poem as ever C.K.

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMay 1, 2014

a delightfully beautiful piece of writing excellent christian dear friend

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 1, 2014

Camry kid this is a beautiful poem!! Thanks for sharing

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 1, 2014

Beautifully penned Christian.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 1, 2014

Really good stuff Mr CK, I enjoyed the energy here. Well done…Jesse

Joseph1112Brampton, Ontario CanadaMay 2, 2014

Hey Candykid excellent write bro! J

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMay 2, 2014

Really nice write Christian,
So romantic !
Mick.

Satanic_OverlordDelhi, IndiaMay 2, 2014

Sugoiiii

phoenixFHPuxi, Shanghai ChinaMay 3, 2014

Beautiful season and beautiful description...

Wo xi'huan zhe'shou shi.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 16, 2014

Thank you Ken. ....forgive me for waiting until summer to respond to your spring time comment...lol..thanks.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 16, 2014

Snow......thank you darling very much for your time and comment.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAJul 16, 2014

Christina, your comments warm my heart everytime. Thank you my dearest perceptive friend.

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJul 17, 2014

love the flow and imagery in this Candy ty for kind words about my Wayra hugs

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMar 12, 2015

Thank you Liam....

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMar 12, 2015

Thank you Girlygirl. ....

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMar 12, 2015

Christian a beautiful lovely tribute to nature's changing season.

Like Ken said what an uplifting write.

aviasSoutheast, Missouri USAMar 12, 2015

Christian...Wish the weather cycle would be less stingy with sun (is it the winter witch?)...BUT sweet Spring is coming soon....thanks for an enjoyable poem! Can almost smell the apple blossoms......

48jojosomewhere, Minnesota USAMar 12, 2015

Thanks for your vision of spring its such a great time of year. Nice poem

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 20, 2016

Thanks Mustapha. ...hope all is well with you. ...

canduce=================, California USAApr 21, 2016

well done, I enjoyed reading this descriptive write.

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAApr 8, 2017

Thanks Jes'.......hope this Spring season is well for you thus' far....

candykidOPAshburn, Virginia USAMar 20, 2019

Thank you all....Today is Spring Equinox, Autumn Equinox will occur nearly exactly 6 months from today regardless of which hemisphere you happen to reside upon. Wishing everyone warm blessings during this unique time of the year.