My Date

As I watch you being escorted to our table
I'm no longer able to sit in my chair
I see those other women stare
I don't really care
I'm so excited to see you
I wanna pull my hair
You're the reason I'm here
My you look so Devine
I ordered some red wine
Now I wanna check out your behind
Oh it looks so fine
I wish we had more time
I m gonna make you all mine
Baby I'm gonna take my time
I see you're red
It's okay my love
What a rush I feel
Tell me this is real
As I move in closer
Your scent is like heaven
Tell me do you taste as good as you smell
I'm gonna gently
Nibble on you nice
And Yet very slow
Savor your taste
Mmmmm I think
Im In Love!
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Posted: Jun 2014
About this poem:
Enjoying a nice steak :-)

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Comments (18)

Spartacus2012
A yummy write Laura!

Kenburger
Mizzy4
Nice twist Laura,
Well done,
Mick.

hug
Joseph1112
Haha there u go again, had me totally fooled, quite entertaining dear, I did think the line "I don't see any blood" was a bit odd but had no idea u were writing about steak! Nice one... J applause hug bouquet
JEANIEMAC
Oh NO!!
I was so excited for you.
What will you be writing when you meet the real thing, I wonder?
Girlygirl196349
Thank you for the cute comment ken wave hug
Girlygirl196349
Sir mick nice to see you my friend wave thank you for your kind comment hug
Girlygirl196349
Mr j how are you my friendwave thanks for reading and the comment I was hoping to fool the reader hug angel
Girlygirl196349
My Jeanie your back !!!teddybear funny I only know how to write about an affair with food laugh poor man when I do find him I'll problem try to eat him good to see you I'm looking forward to reading your next poem!wave hug
pinklady1967
a lil romance..i to like to dabble my pen and paper in a lil romance..:).. nice..
Girlygirl196349
Lil butterfly I was just having a bit of fun::laugh: thanks for you comment hug angel wave
darkhorse555
beautifully penned laura dear friend angel grin
cafetwo2010
This is so cool. I was almost ready to take a cold
shower. Lol
Cafe
Girlygirl196349
wave Thank you for your kind comment Liam! hug angel
Mintaka
Love the behind part thumbs up


giggle
Girlygirl196349
wave Catetwo laugh I did what I set out to do I'm so please to hear you found it to be cool.thank you so kindly hug angel wave
Girlygirl196349
I'm sorry I dont recall who you are
SCatlyn
rolling on the floor laughing Loved this, even before I discovered the 'behind' you were referring to... and then rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
Great poem, Girly!!! cheering applause

Lyn teddybear yay
Girlygirl196349
I'm pleased to read that this made you laugh teddybear Love ya laugh teddybear teddybear
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by Girlygirl196349 (25 Poems)
on Jun 2014
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